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liquid_courage May 26 2008, 22:53:16 UTC
Dude, where the hell are you taking this? Man, I am so lost.

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kedda_nouvelle May 26 2008, 23:07:51 UTC
Oh no!

Where did I loose you.

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crazychica802 May 26 2008, 23:55:51 UTC
I think I need to read the last chapter before I can pass proper judgment on this one. I will say that the heavy make out foreplay session and the swingers party were made of total win.

Post it. Now.

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kedda_nouvelle May 27 2008, 19:51:15 UTC
well it's to bad that you refused to comment on the next section, cause I'm not posting until you take that back.

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crazychica802 May 27 2008, 22:53:34 UTC
Liar.

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kedda_nouvelle May 27 2008, 23:00:56 UTC
You sure?

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ihearttarget21 May 27 2008, 01:48:37 UTC
you need to update the last chapter tonight. forget tomorrow or wednesday. i want it tonight. *stomps foot*

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kedda_nouvelle May 27 2008, 19:53:13 UTC
greedy

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xyliette May 27 2008, 04:09:47 UTC
I'm lazy but I do love this chapter. The beginning conversation is so, so Mark. Just...perfect. :)

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kedda_nouvelle May 27 2008, 19:51:56 UTC
When are you not lazy?

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teelke May 27 2008, 05:19:09 UTC

“You guys are sleeping together aren’t you,” Laura asked from the other side of the table.

“No!” they exclaimed simultaneously.

“Yes, you are!”

“No, we aren’t,” Derek protested.

“I didn’t think you were until you denied it. Oh my God. You’re sleeping together!” Laura glanced between the two of them, her eyes teasing, “Mom is going to be so pissed.”

“Don’t tell mom,” Derek sighed, rubbing a hand over his face, “Or Kathleen. I’m begging you not to tell Kathleen.”

“Derek!” Addison exclaimed.

Laura’s eyes widened in surprise.

“She was kidding, You idiot. You just told her!”

“She knew.”

“She did not,” Addison buried her face in her hands, “Have you met Laura. That’s how she jokes. God Derek.”

Laura shook her head, “You’re an idiot. You both are. Idiots.”

MADE OF TOTAL WIN !
That Mark slept with Derek´s sister is soo Mark.

Loved this chapter <3

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kedda_nouvelle May 27 2008, 19:52:25 UTC
Haha, ya thats one of my favorite parts.

Thanks.

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