This is so well written and engaging. I love Connor's point of view, they wathe sees the wraith. I really enjoyed seeing how much he loved his dad and how good he was at fighting, how hard it was for him to leave his world, but how driven he was by the fight. Great, great job, especially this description:
He studies one face after another and pauses on one that seems familiar. The man makes him think of an office and yelling.
Of an older man sitting behind a desk and a photo of two boys. It makes his heart ache a he pushes the memory away because he can’t afford to think of the past any more. There would be nothing left for him even if he decides to abandon his mission and go home.
Shows how out of touch he is, how he had to forcibly forget the past.
anothrdreamer5 is right- he seems out of touch. It would be great to see him acting odd around things in Atlantis and seeming to find normal thing difficult. Remember the idea I had about Connor whispering his lines...this could be how he begins to remember what he shoved behind a wall in his mind.
I also desperatly want Connor vs Ronan with Connor wooping his arse. Cause that would be awesome :)
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He studies one face after another and pauses on one that seems familiar. The man makes him think of an office and yelling.
Of an older man sitting behind a desk and a photo of two boys. It makes his heart ache a he pushes the memory away because he can’t afford to think of the past any more. There would be nothing left for him even if he decides to abandon his mission and go home.
Shows how out of touch he is, how he had to forcibly forget the past.
GReat, great job!
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I also desperatly want Connor vs Ronan with Connor wooping his arse. Cause that would be awesome :)
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or...Holy shit! What just happened? Did Ronon stun him.....and also finally John and Connor meet!!! Yay!
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