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Feb 27, 2010 23:00

C is for Clandestine provided graciously by wavesofwood .

(it's also for boys sneaking around, sneaking phone calls and text messages when they're supposed to be distant and cold and bitter).

I'm sorry it's taken so long. I tried three or four different ideas but this is the one that stuck.

Title: Clandestine
Fandom: bandom
Pairing: Brendon/Ryan
Rating: ( Read more... )

fic, alphafics, brendon/ryan, nc-17

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egelantier February 28 2010, 09:49:53 UTC
ohhh, this is so lovely. i love how it's just all quiet, not tense, but rather full of energy. and secrets. thank you.

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egelantier February 28 2010, 09:50:40 UTC
(e for entwined, maybe?)

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kyasuriin February 28 2010, 15:07:41 UTC

oh thank you so much! And I love your 'E' suggestion (even if it makes me think of entwined destinies and all sorts of epic things that don't belong in ficlets :p)

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egelantier February 28 2010, 15:11:19 UTC
ha, epic things! you could always pretend that epic story is already written and you're making an itty bitty coda to it :D

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kyasuriin February 28 2010, 15:06:40 UTC

I know, I've been dying for post-split fic with happy endings. I finally gave up refreshing my delicious account and wrote some!
Spencer wins so hard, it's true. Nothing gets past him! I'm so glad it made you smile :D

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softlyforgotten February 28 2010, 10:12:23 UTC
Oh man, this was fabulous. I really liked the dirty texting, I don't think I've read that before and it was so brilliant & well done, especially the last message, oh my heart. ♥ I have a big thing for people trying to keep things secret, so this was awesome. <333

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kyasuriin February 28 2010, 15:05:15 UTC

oh I'm glad the dirty texting worked. I was like 'uh... this is awkward /o\ I should cut this out entirely' but then my beta was all 'no, it's hot. trust me' so I did and there we are. :D I'm so glad you enjoyed!

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harborshore February 28 2010, 10:52:08 UTC
Hothothot. *grins* I LOVE that you had them doing something else than what it sounds like they planned on the phone, it makes it much hotter and much more real.

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kyasuriin February 28 2010, 15:04:02 UTC

*grin* I find actual sex so hot but then when it came time, I found that the rushed, needy fingering was hotter and more desperate and I'm glad you agree!

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oddishly February 28 2010, 11:25:02 UTC
Mmmm, this is awesome! The two of them trying to keep everything hidden and secret, yes yes yes, I love it :) Also, that image of Ryan and Alex shopping together, so unexpectedly friendly and, hmm, kind of sweet, it's lovely.

And, hey, no complaints here where your drabbles become 6,000 words long :) ♥

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kyasuriin February 28 2010, 15:02:34 UTC

thank youuuuu. I thought you might like that little Alex cameo :)

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