Happy Gen Fic Day, Stargate fandom!

[kalquessa]

Title: Time Share (O is for Old Age)
Author: kalquessa
Fandom: Stargate SG-1
Genre: Gen, Character Study. Humor? Angst? A little of each? Not sure.
Word Count: 948
Characters: Jack, mini!Jack
Season/Spoilers: "Fragile Balance" in particular, Season 10 in general
Rating: G
Warnings: Beta? What is this "beta" of which you speak

Comments

[supplyship]

Jack will ALWAYS be hardest on himself, and you capture that beautifully. That the two of them sort of circle each other for a bit before diving headfirst into angst is just so... Jack. A really nice moment, M!

Tiny little thing - "...concedes with a role of eyes.." role should be roll

[kalquessa]

Thank you! For the head-pats and the typo-spotting. I knew there would be something like that in here. *goes to fix*

[lokei]

Oh my. Jack and Jack-clone stories always break my heart. You did a lovely job with this one.

[kalquessa]

Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed! (Love the icon, by the way. Possibly my favorite "Window of Opportunity" quote.)

[thraesja]

"I'm not moving because a copy of myself decided to fish here today."
"My sentiments exactly."

Ah, the joys of two Jacks arguing with each other. You really did a nice job of capturing his voice in this. Twice over, really.

"You know," Jack offers after another long pause, "Daniel tried to convince me once that having you running around was a sort of immortality because my memories and ideas and what-have-you would survive me, at least for a good thirty years."
"You tell him that's a load of crap?" the clone asks.
"Yeah, pretty much," replies Jack,

Sweet. Jack's truly talented when it comes to being able to avoid being deep while simultaneously being...deep. Daniel should really count himself lucky he's not here for this conversation.

And, oh man. The inhumanity of not being able to buy beer for going on four years. My heart goes out to poor mini!Jack.

[kalquessa]

Jack's truly talented when it comes to being able to avoid being deep while simultaneously being...deep.

So true. *loves him*

And, oh man. The inhumanity of not being able to buy beer for going on four years.

I know, I felt so bad for him! Poor mini!Jack! A life without beer is...well, I won't say "no life at all" because there is still pie. But still.

[neiths_arrow]

Too precious! Snark for snark - they each get a point with extra points for style. You had me laughing out loud in a couple spots. I think the rest of the team would pay for the best seats to watch this exchange. Thanks!

[kalquessa]

*laughs* Thank you! I felt like they both deserved to get at least one good dig in.

[anonymous]

that whole part about charlie's birthday cake & party got to me. very nice story

[kalquessa]

Thank you! I appreciate the feedback.