Prologue of my Doug/Padma fic, as requestly by newbie1990

[justspaz]

Well, she requested it. Multiple Times. And I said I would deliver. I thought this was going to be some short thing, but I just got to introducing them to each other and it's already 985 words

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[newbie1990]

Eeee! I have a fic dedicated to me! I am so very, very happy. And...and it is wonderful! The incredibly blatant Cox/JD! The astonishing Cox-voice! Doug's utter uselessness! Poor, poor Padma! And my name is Hannah (I have never, ever seen it used as a Cox-girl's-name and I am floating on a cloud of insane happiness)! How in God's name you made this work is beyond me, but you did, and I am so, so happy! If I am persuasive, does this mean I can get you to write Clarkson/Cho too?

[justspaz]

Who else would I dedicate it too? The voices in my head? Thankies thankies thankies! Hehe. At first I was like, HP reference (Hannah Abbott and her pigtails) but then I remembered it was your name!

It's a gift, and a curse.

It would be a mockery, because I would fail at Clarkson-voice!

[newbie1990]

Well, you could dedicate it to your head-voices, but that would be you know, insane.

Oh, it's mainly a gift.

You would not fail at Clarkson-voice. You got this to work, for which you deserve a medal. I have no idea how to write Clarkson-voice, but at a guess it's like Cox-voice with added bizarre metaphors/similes, less word elongation, fewer girl's names, and no obsessive use of the word 'there'. A wild guess. And your Cox-voice rules, so I'm sure that would work.

[justspaz]

Ah yes. It's more of a JD head voice, like me narrating random things.

Hehe.

Ugh, I'm scared at what it would be like in his head.

Random thought: They sell British magazines at a bookstore chain called Borders here, and they had Top Gear. Included was this free dvd of things from the show. The picture of the 3 on the front still makes me laugh. It's so weird.

i love it!

[anonymous]

its good so far, sarah :DD

HET SHIP?!?!

hehe, kiiiidding...let me know when you update!

Re: i love it!

[justspaz]

Hehe. Thankies

IT'S AN UNUSUAL PAIRING, THEREFORE OK

I shall, I shall :D.

[anonymous]

Hey, its Carly again. Rereading this :D
and im writing this as i read

i love the end of the first little section..."The rain still drip-dripped against the window."

i love that style of writing...very good!

hehe...got to love the subtle snarry
one typo though...."but Padma new Harry well"

and i love the "And so the month began." ending too

so yay...im probably not grasping the whole thing since i have never seen scrubs before...but i am just picturing neville like you said *nod*

and you have a great writing style, so i love it

i liked this part too- "You-Know-Who Whom we are No Longer Afraid to Call Voldemort Because we Can See How Weak He Really Was"

love it sarah...on to reread the next part!

[justspaz]

Hehe. Thank you! For liking what you do and for the typo finding!

[tearingapart]

I just found this, I love it! Are you planning on continuing? :)

[justspaz]

Oh, thank you so much!

It is actually a finished project, with all parts under the 'Conflicting Invitations' tag, but I only currently have this part edited for mistakes and the such. If you can deal with my overuse of commas, then the fic is there.

:D

[incunabulist]

Ah, this is insane and awesome. I think I love you. Hmm, I see you say above that there's more of this. *is not afraid of commas*

[justspaz]

Oh, why thank you so much! For the review and the declaration of possible love.

Not just commas, but yes, it is complete. Cheesy, moral teaching epilogue and all!