The Villain Academy- Chapter Three: What's Your Damage?

Dec 01, 2009 21:26

Hi, everyone!

Yeah, me again. *dodges rotten tomatoes* So, seeing as the last chapter of "The Villain Academy" ended on a cliffhanger and I feel like showing off my NaNo, here's Chapter Three, entitled "What's Your Damage?"!

Maybe I'll post more if you *really* want it...;) Read Chapter Two first. In Chapter Three, Tori enters the Villain ( Read more... )

nanowrimo, june is easily distracted, i like this chapter muchly, the villain academy, chapter 40, random

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kyra_master701 December 2 2009, 05:04:17 UTC
Ooh nice.
Rune sounds really cool. That may be because I have a weakness for well-written real vampires.
Also Lyn's a good name. Sounds much more evil than Tori-Lynne. Srsly.
Angie likes setting things on fire, huh? Alrighty. Thank you for getting the Preamble out of my head and the Pyro!Gerard quote into it!

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junebug_13 December 3 2009, 00:53:44 UTC
:D
I like Rune as well. There was a very real need for well-written vampires.
Yes, far better.
Pyro!Gerard will set your house on fire and watch, enchanted, for hours! xD
~June

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julessims December 2 2009, 16:18:23 UTC
YAY! I liked it a lot!

The different characters seem like they're a lot of fun, and they're all so unique. Angie and the Snowflakes are my favorites so far. When I was reading the Snowflakes dialogue, I kept imagining two sinister looking girls talking in really creepy voices, and they looked somewhat like the ghost girls in The Shining (the movie, not the book), except the way you described them.

Yeah, this is definitely great. I love it so much already!

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junebug_13 December 3 2009, 00:55:30 UTC
Yay!
I loved making up all the characters, they're all very cool in their own ways.
OMG YES exactly! I couldn't get the creepy little girls from The Shining out of my head at first!
Aww, yay, you guys make me feel superfantasticawesome!
~June

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