Four LOST drabbles.

Jun 04, 2009 00:47

OKAY, monumental moment here. I've been playing around with some LOST fanfiction lately, so I decided I'd test the waters. Baby steps. I'm a tad nervous since this is the first time I've ever posted anything I've written anywhere and I'm still new to fanfiction. These aren't anything to get excited over. (How excited can you get over 100 words?) ( Read more... )

fic: lost: juliet, fic: lost: ben, fic: lost: jacob, fanfiction, fic: lost: richard, fic: lost: daniel, fic: lost, fic: lost: miles

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wandaxmaximoff June 4 2009, 08:50:19 UTC
Oh wow! Those are all awesome. I don't know which one I like best - obviously, I love the Richard one - but they're all so wonderfully written, and touched me in some way.

And kudos to you for being able to successfully write 100 word drabbles. I find anything under 500 words impossible, so it always impresses me when I see someone write good drabbles; especially ones as fantastic as yours.

Keep up the hard work, I cannot wait to see more fanfiction from you. ^_^

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joyyjpg June 4 2009, 15:59:02 UTC
Wow, thank you so much! *blushes* I'm very glad that you like them!

The 100-word limit was pretty fun, actually. The first one I wrote was the Miles and Dan one and when I finished I thought, "I'm probably still under 100 words," but it was 120-something. When I finished the Juliet one I thought, "This is way over 100 words," and it was only like 89. Tricky, tricky. :P

Thanks! I've got a few bits and pieces of fics on my computer that I hope to finish up soon.

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phelipa June 4 2009, 13:08:44 UTC
Wow.
I absolutely adore the first one. It is so perfect and in character for all of them - I am especially in love with the very last line and Miles' reaction to seeing her. The other ones are fabulous and I really love the last one as well. Really, really well done! I hope we get to see more from you in the future :)

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joyyjpg June 4 2009, 16:02:32 UTC
Thank you!! That's one of my favorites, too. It actually started out as part of a bigger fic, but I thought that was really all it needed, that one scene. I'm glad you like it, thanks for reading and commenting! ♥

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phelipa June 5 2009, 00:23:59 UTC
Ooo, I would love to read the long version if you ever decide to continue. As much as I hope Juliet's alive I'm enjoying all the dead!Juliet fics :)

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joyyjpg June 6 2009, 03:04:02 UTC
Thanks, I think I will have to finish it soon!

I'm really enjoying all the dead!Juliet fics that are springing up too, actually! Even though I want her to be alive so much. It's kind of like the incident resetting history. I hope that doesn't actually happen on the show, but it has inspired some really awesome fics.

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valhalla37 June 4 2009, 13:46:41 UTC
Oooooh, these were all fantastic, but the third one -- Dan and Miles -- just grabbed me. The language is so precisely perfect, and the characterization right on. Dan's despair and Miles' resignation are so crystal-clear -- and only in 100 words! Bravo!

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joyyjpg June 4 2009, 16:06:00 UTC
Thank you so much! That was the first one of these that I wrote, and it's probably my favorite as well since I love any interaction between Dan and Miles. I'm glad I was able to get the right feeling across in such a short piece. Thank you for your comments! ♥

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angela_weber June 4 2009, 13:54:20 UTC
These are all so amazing. My favorite is the first--it's so very powerful and in-character--but the others are also fantastic. Wonderfully worded, and so skillfully packed into the drabble format!

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joyyjpg June 4 2009, 16:11:48 UTC
Wow, thank you! *blush* I'm glad that you like them. Thank you for reading and commenting!

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batkisses June 4 2009, 15:02:59 UTC
Ooo, all of these are awesome! Are you sure this is first time, lol! Can't wait for more. :)

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joyyjpg June 4 2009, 16:15:32 UTC
Thank you, bb! I'm glad you think so (and I'm glad you're enjoying that icon)!

Well, these are the first once I've completed anyway. I have some other ones that just need to be finished. Hopefully I can start working my creative muscles on a regular basis again. :D

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