Fic - Hannibal. It's a Rich Man's World. Chapter 1/2 Rating NC-17

[jomel10]

Fandom: Hannibal

Comments

[jenanime4eva]

Hot dang that was a graphic and intense chapter :O. I can smell Hannibal coming about a mile off to kick Mason's ass and avenge his boyfriend Will. I wonder if Mason's face is still gonna be so pretty after all that happens... :P.

Oh just one little typo: "He could hear the barks and yelps of his dugs, yapping at his heels" is presumably "He could hear the barks and yelps of his DOGS, yapping at his heels" unless Will has adopted a new species of dugs ;).

[jomel10]

Thanks for the typo catch! Have corrected :)

Mason's face might just not be so pretty by the end of the fic, you know... And the dogs (dugs) might just get a feeding... :)

[kuhekabir]

It is very intense! Great! :)

[jomel10]

Did you notice the changes I'd made, mostly on your suggestion? What did you think? :)

[kuhekabir]

I noticed. Made me feel VERY important. LOL. And I love what you did with it.

[jomel10]

We,, you ARE important! I love the way you check over my stories, makes it feel as though we're a team!

I should be sending over the last Heroes Don't Exist some time over the weekend :)

[papyrus4sirus]

I need chapter two like right now.