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Arashi - AU - Voyager 11/12

Apr 25, 2009 18:15

Title: Voyager
Chapter: 11
Fandom: Arashi
Pairing: ohmiya etc.
Word count: 3598
Notes: i don't exactly know.

earlier chapters:
1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 7.5 | 8 | 9 | 10

( chapter 11 )

length: series, fic: voyager, genre: au, pairing: ohno/nino, fandom: arashi

Comments 89

waxrose April 25 2009, 15:48:45 UTC

EEEEEEEEE. ♥ This chapter made me cry. Nino. :((((

starsystems April 25 2009, 15:52:21 UTC

lol I put Nino through some weird shit. xD
♥

nicefinalbeam April 25 2009, 15:49:50 UTC

OMFG THIS IS THE BEST SURPRISE EVER.

*rolls around, flails, claps giddily*

Seriously, this is the best. I don't know what to say about the chapter because I was mostly just letting my heart speed up and my eyes were really wide and yay happy!

Except Ohno still makes me nervous.

starsystems April 25 2009, 15:54:15 UTC

I HAVE NO IDEA HOW A HANGOVER MAKES ME ACTUALLY DO STUFF. I woke up this morning with the parts that had been missing from this chapter in my head.

:D ♥

fluttering April 25 2009, 15:55:19 UTC

shfksfls;;sjs of course. Of course, Nino gets Satoshi back with food. NEXT ONE IS THE LAST CHAPTER, OMG!! Excited, bb. I love this fic. :))

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starsystems April 25 2009, 16:00:31 UTC

LOL sometimes I wonder what the hell I am doing. xDD

...adflkj I wish I knew how this thing is going to end. Might make writing the last chapter slightly easier.

fluttering April 25 2009, 16:02:50 UTC

idk how people plan out a fic? Sounds difficult, but I'm sure you'll find a way. You are my favoritest little AU ficcer ever, okay? :) :)

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starsystems April 25 2009, 16:06:50 UTC

i have drawn mindmaps and timelines for this fic to keep it together. ;o; it's given me so much trouble.

at least i have the plot points down, i just don't know how the characters are going to react.

;o; ♥

hontowa April 25 2009, 16:00:04 UTC

So much suspense in this chapter! The pull was almost tangible. I'm sad to see this almost over, but excited to see the conclusion at the same time :)

starsystems April 25 2009, 16:02:54 UTC

i've left this fic unfinished for too long. I'm glad it's almost over so I can start thinking about something else. xD
♥

aeslis April 25 2009, 16:04:38 UTC

... This is amazing, honestly. The way you apply the senses makes it feel really rich and bright. ♥

And I found it really interesting that he called him Satoshi while he was searching, but Ohno everywhere else.

starsystems April 25 2009, 16:11:15 UTC

thank you~ ♥

I probably had some kind of an idea behind that, like making it more intimate when he needs to pull him back. x3

aeslis April 25 2009, 16:16:53 UTC

Now is that 'probably' because you didn't realize you were doing it? XD

starsystems April 25 2009, 16:18:55 UTC

I can't remember anymore. It was in the first draft that I wrote ages ago and I just kept it in. xD

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