FIC: October 19 (2/2) Rated R

[jaq_of_spades]

A/N: This is part two of October 19 - sorry it was so long in coming. If you want to read part one, it's here: http://jaq-of-spades.livejournal.com/8654.html

Alternatively, you can read the whole story in one go on the new WRFA archive - I'm loaded! whee! It's at http://www.wolverineandrogue.com/wrfa/

Jean came back in May. At first, she thought it

Comments

[deep_salt_water]

Beautiful, as you already know I think it is.

Tiny thing though:
Because this man was had the body and soul of her lover, without the dark places and outsider’s rage.

Might wanna fix the 'was had' bit. Other than that, perfect. I loved being able to read this story before it got posted. Best part of betaing ;)

[jaq_of_spades]

Done! Thank you for the heads up: I should have run the new section by you first. *hangs head* But thought I better let you concentrate on Ensnare ;)

[crankylex]

So now I'm sitting here, crying and scaring the dog.

He was crying, now, choked sobs echoing down the receiver.

“Stop, Marie. Just fucking stop. Wherever you are, just leave, and come home. You are enough. You’re fucking everything. I need you here.”

OH GOD. That one hurt. In a good way, but hurt nontheless.

I'm so glad to see you back to writing.

[jaq_of_spades]

Thank you, thank you. Its lovely to be back! This one took a while to write because I had it half done when someone *glares at Sares* threw me a whole new motif that just HAD to be included. So I started again.

Hopefully the next one won't take as long, or I won't get much done before the baby is due!

[skybluerae]

Wow! Loved it. Love the symbolism of her coat, so much a part of who she is and she thinks Marie and Rogue are dead...but they're right there with her, she is both and then some. Just beautiful. I'm so happy to see you have your fic feet back!

[jaq_of_spades]

Glad it was worth the wait. The coat was Sares' idea, but it was so perfect for what I wanted to express - evolution and growth, over time - that I ran with it and am proud of the result. Will take a short break to concentrate on my beta duties (you first, promise!) and will then look at trying to decide which bunny to chase down next!

[cassandralee711]

This was beautiful. Great writing.

[jaq_of_spades]

Thank you! I was inspired by a long stretch away from anything creative! Needed to get a bit arty to do the idea justice.

[sweety167]

Oh..wow. I love this! It's so emotion and raw. It's just amazing.
Thank you for writing it.

*hugs*

[jaq_of_spades]

*hugs back* No problem at all. I'm so glad you like it ... I thought something that had a little angst and a lot of growth and development along a rocky path might appeal to you. Happy New Year!

[sweety167]

You know I'm an angst queen. hehe It was perfect, thanks darlin'.

And Happy New Year to you too.