The Wolf Within

May 25, 2009 20:01


Title: The Wolf Within
Chapter: Seven - On The Trail
Time: New Moon
Rating: PG-13
Notes: I don't own or claim to own these characters, they belong to SMeyer.
Summary: Victoria and Laurent are gone now. Jake and Bella are together, but it appears that another vampire, maybe more than one, is still out there threatening Bella and the lives of those ( Read more... )

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snowyowl_17 May 26 2009, 05:31:38 UTC
Great chapter! I am glad that Bella is fitting into the pack so well. Is Charlie just going to take her changes and go with them? Or is he going to keep asking her about them?

I love the cliffhanger! Can't wait for more!!!

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itslikenature May 26 2009, 15:36:38 UTC
IDK, I'm thinking about having him find out, or at least suspecting something strange is happening with Bella. We'll see. :) Thanks for reading.

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isisgodiva May 29 2009, 05:00:44 UTC
I still have to read this (I think I left off at chapter 4) but I must say that you make me so jealous with your ability to write out lenghty AND quality chapters to a story. So very jealous.

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itslikenature May 29 2009, 14:16:51 UTC
Haha! Isn't that a polite way to say you're full of hot air. ;)

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isisgodiva May 29 2009, 21:55:32 UTC
Dude, I said QUALITY chapters! You know you're writing rocks my socks :D

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itslikenature May 30 2009, 01:10:29 UTC
I know. I was just messing with you. LOL Thank you. ;)

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nevaeh_v May 30 2009, 07:06:29 UTC
Holy CRAP!!!!!!! OMG OMG!!!!! What the hell is it with you two Jessica and You always make me feel like a twelve year old girl looking at a hot guy and what not lol you guys make me shriek like a over excited girl i'm a soon to be 21 year old woman for crying out loud i had my fiance scared again when i kept saying OMG OMG!!! he's like what what?? i had to shoo him away so i could keep reading! lol I loved this chapter!!! thats so crazy those newborns!!!!

Come back soon please i want to know what happens next!!!! Oh og Bella is gonna get it from Sam this time even worse lol

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itslikenature May 31 2009, 14:06:15 UTC
Jess and I have to try and keep you entertained, hahah. And it's okay to squee like a 12 year old sometimes, it's keeps ya young. LOL I'm glad you've caught up. I will be posting more soon, I hope. Thanks!

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unalike June 2 2009, 08:25:07 UTC
I'm so late at reading this but omg so good. can't wait for a new chapter :)

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itslikenature June 2 2009, 14:17:31 UTC
Hey, glad you came back to read. I'm working on the next chapter, but I better get in gear. LOL Thanks!!

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