Requested ficlet: Midnight on the Firing Line (Naruto; for rosalui )

Apr 14, 2010 17:24

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Title: “Midnight on the Firing Line”
Author: Shaitanah
Rating: G
Timeline: post-canon, about a year after Sasuke’s supposed return to Konoha
Summary: Apparently Naruto’s idea of friendship is making his friend’s life harder.
Disclaimer: Naruto belongs to Kishimoto Masashi. Lyrics from Lighthouse.mp3 by Spleen (translated by me ( Read more... )

anime, gen, naruto, p: sasuke/naruto, fanfiction, challenge

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istne_pieklo April 14 2010, 13:54:04 UTC
*SQUEE* ILU too))) I'm happy-happy-happy that you liked it))
Hehehe, Naruto can be so annoyingly persistent that Sasuke's just bound to give in one day))) I just hope it happens sooner rather than later))

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ylmik_wisty April 14 2010, 19:30:01 UTC
8'D Aw. I loved it. I should try to be more specific, but.. ah, this was cute. XD

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istne_pieklo April 14 2010, 19:39:45 UTC
Thank you))) I think it's more silly than cute)) But I'm glad you enjoyed it, darling.

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helike April 14 2010, 20:02:15 UTC
> WHATEVER! MADE U SMILE THO!

I smiled, too :D

>I know you do, Sasuke thought, resigned.

Would be nice to see it in the manga >.>

Good story, honey ^^

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istne_pieklo April 14 2010, 20:08:16 UTC
I smiled, too :D Hoorah! Then my eveil goal is achieved)))
Oh yes, I hope Kishi has smn beat sense into Sasuke after all...
Thanks, darling. :)))

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helike April 14 2010, 20:10:33 UTC
That evil goal being making me smile? :P
Well... Let's hope so >.> Sasuke is not even evil... he's plain stupid at the moment =_=
You're welcome ^^

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istne_pieklo April 14 2010, 20:13:24 UTC
People in general. But I'm always extra-happy to make you smile since you have a specific sense of humour))))
I think it's beyond stupid already. It's unfortunately crazy. Poor boy's completely off the rocker.

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gwyneda April 15 2010, 02:02:14 UTC
...*too busy gargling on her own spit to form coherent thought*

...ohgod that was... perfect- PERFECT I know Sasuke's being a retarded idiot and unjustifiably cruel to naruto, but still... STILL. I hold that small small glimmer of hope that he can be saved and this story just made me realize how much I love these guys together. not even TOGETHER together just... like Sasuke means, together. ohgod. OHGOD WHY.

you make my love for Sasuke leak out of my heart and it sort of bittersweet ;_;

but this...was so cute in an abstract way, which I assume you were aiming for? but Sasuke... you always manage to portray Sasuke so human.. so SANE. it makes my heart pang for the series because I want this so hard. so BAD. I want Sasuke to find his salvation so desperately that whenever I read NaruSasu centric fics now I only feel sad because it feels like they'll never mend the gap/wall/bridge that sasuke himself keeps throwing at Naruto.

...thank you for this though. the latest chapter was made of love and win, and this just topped it off <3

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istne_pieklo April 15 2010, 14:43:17 UTC
XDDD Thank you, darling! <333 It's always a pleasure to receive a review from you!
I hold that glimmer of hope too. Otherwise I wouldn't find the strength to keep reading. These two definitely belong together (in all senses).
Yep, that's pretty much what I was aiming for)) Cute, light, funny, weird, whatever fits))
The latest chapter made me laugh a lot))))
Thank you for reading, darling! <3

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geekgirl62 April 15 2010, 13:29:44 UTC
"He turned to the fridge and pushed all the magnets down, leaving only two to spell out,

…HN."

Never before have two simple little letters made me so happy!

I can just picture Sasuke playing with the plastic letters on the fridge. Loved the nice little memory of his mom and Itachi. And Naruto? The imagery of him hiding behind his writing board is just so wtfery funny, all I know is I now have the biggest grin on my face! Thanks for the awesome post!

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istne_pieklo April 15 2010, 14:37:37 UTC
LOL, thank you! :) Even Sasuke can be a darling sometimes, it seems)))
I always try in my stories to give Sasuke as normal childhood as possible, hence all the cute little details))) Sometimes it seems in the anime that it was all training and nothing more. I don't want it to be this way.
Naruto is... well, Naruto)))))) He brings the lulz)))
Thank you for reading! <3

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