Title: “Tales of the Revolution”
Author: Shaitanah
Rating: R
Timeline: AU!future as shown in episodes 4.01, 4.07, 4.08.
Summary: In 2037, few people remember the house in Barry where the War Child was born and even fewer know what happened to it. The truth is, the house is still there, serving as a beacon of hope for those who oppose the
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The fic is really fascinating -- and it desrves a long-winded comment -- but I'm kind of braindead --- so I'll just say the atmosphere is amazingly bleak but haunting like all of your distopian fics (might really be *your* genre).
The assault scene kept me at the edge of my creaky chair-- quite scary and adrenaline-inducing, while the conversation with Guy made me smile :) The toy car <3 and the song!
Hannah is such a free spirit. I really like her.
*crawls out*
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I think this was my first assault scene ever. O_o I don't usually write non-con and I debated with myself whether I should have it go all the way or stop it at some point. I figured I'd stop it; otherwise it would get too grim and traumatize Hannah too much))
I thought Hannah deserved some depth. She was coming off as a tereotyped emo teen in FF, so I thought I'd explain why she is like that)) She basically recruited herself))) She has a right to be a bit gloomy))
Thank you for the lovely comment, darling! <3
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I think it was a good call to stop it there! And yes, the most ironic recruitment ever (I forgot to coment on it >__<) -- she's one of a kind :D
She's still a teen through and through but in a good way.
It was a pleasure to read, as always <333
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I think Ilsa's story might be next. I have a few ideas; hers is pretty dark too. But damn, I really want to finish that Leo fic and that Eve fic and bleeeegh... OC fics make me depressed b/c they're half-this and half-that and I feel like I'm trapping my own characters in someone else's universe. XD Stupid, I know.
Well, I think she'll be a teen for a while))) Adam, f.ex., is 46 and he still acts like he's 16)))
I'm glad to hear that. I had weird fun writing it))) That 2037!world is so fucked up but I'm getting a weird kick out of plotting out the details. You know, the kind of stuff they call бытовуха))))
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