Aw, this chapter was kinda sad although it was truthfully the only way this could end. I really like how you developed their past story thru their present and Woogyu's relationship is so precious.
Also, I don't usually like POV's shifts but you made it work here, nice :)
I really hope you don't stop publishing openly, I'm not always the best commenter but I would definitely be interested in reading anything you write in the future. Oh well, but I understand you feel this way, I just think there are few good Woogyu writers so I wouldn't like missing one...
This was a story I wanted to really really keep as close to the possible reality as possible. But I wanted it to be canon as well. Yeah...the ending made me really struggle. There might be better solution for the mess, but I just couldn't think of it now.
I thought that making present and remembering past will stress the fact how the thing they're doing is practically the same but means something different to them now than it did in the past.
I wish I was better in writing nobody POV, but with Jealousy I proved myself that writing in first POV makes writing for me a little more easier. I think it's cause I'm not native and so far I am mostly used to only express myself in that language.
Can you give me some Woogyu recommendations? I am so fond of the pairing lately, I miss reading them <3 And wow, thank you for saying I'm good Woogyu writer. That means a lot <3 I am not good with language or story building and stuff like that so I try to focus my stories on emotions and feelings. So you can imagine how happy it makes me to hear
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Because I find canon way more interesting than au, I think this kind of stories between canon and au such as future!fic or so usually work well. So yeah, I appreciate the canon in this story, the situation may not be the actual one but the characters are as realistic as possible and I like that :)
I actually noticed this fic just now, and i read all the chapters, one after the other. Personally, i think that you saying things like "i regret posting this" it's really sad: i know, feedback is important, but still...It's your creation. Please don't understimate it or regret posting it. It also hurts to read since i liked it T_T
Thanks :) But...I do try to show my thoughts on the guys real interactions or feelings I sense from observing them. Of course, that the yaoi in it is, well, fictional addition to it, I don't really think they do cross physical boundaries in real :)) And I just always wish that there would be person to come and say "wow! That's exactly what I think! What made you think this and that" you know? I know, I should just enjoy writing for myself, but honestly since I have the story happeing in my own mind playing nicely as a movie, why bother to write it down? I write it down because I wanna share it with others, of course....
I get what you mean, and i totally respect it. I am sorry there isn't enough of us who has the courtesy to show appreciation or who wants to interact in any sort of way. Just...uhm. It would be such a waste for us to not see your works anymore. Sorry for saying this.
I know <3 You commented on chapter 1, thank you for that, really. I was really cranky yesterday when I was posting this and I just needed to get that feeling out of my chest
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woot woot ur stalker-ish reader from aff lol dunno if u changed the formatting already but it's quite alright now :) now i just need to enlarge it cos my screen is too small lolol so dun worry too much it's not really the formatting's fault!
and please dun stop posting stories in the future! pwetty pwease? :)
I finally manage to correct the formatting of the first chapter, yahoo ~ :)
I think I won't stop, anyway. I did tell myself I will many times but I usually can't last longer than a year XD My mind is full of story ideas and there is always a break point when I need to get something out so I can concentrate on real life again properly :)
I am writing little Woggyu au for my other friend for Christmas, so I guess taht will follow. And sooner than in a year :) Watch out for it, I guess :)
I was just reading through your other comments, and I saw the one about your ending. Personally, I loved it for the reason that kept everything real. Especially how rushed everything was once the weekend ended. I think it emphasized how much it impacted their lives (Woohyun's especially, in my opinion) and then after that everything's almost a blur (but with all the events always bringing them back to that weekend
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I first wanted to write it all in Woohyun's POV. But then I realized, that giving each character time to show their view will add on how emotinal this is supposed to be. But as it's happening all in Woohyun's flat and Woohyun is the one who still wasn't able to let go of Sunggyu (even though that might be mutual, only that Sunggyu managed to distract himself well with what he though is expected and more important) I think it naturaly evolves around Woohyun the most. It's not you
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Also, I don't usually like POV's shifts but you made it work here, nice :)
I really hope you don't stop publishing openly, I'm not always the best commenter but I would definitely be interested in reading anything you write in the future. Oh well, but I understand you feel this way, I just think there are few good Woogyu writers so I wouldn't like missing one...
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I thought that making present and remembering past will stress the fact how the thing they're doing is practically the same but means something different to them now than it did in the past.
I wish I was better in writing nobody POV, but with Jealousy I proved myself that writing in first POV makes writing for me a little more easier. I think it's cause I'm not native and so far I am mostly used to only express myself in that language.
Can you give me some Woogyu recommendations? I am so fond of the pairing lately, I miss reading them <3
And wow, thank you for saying I'm good Woogyu writer. That means a lot <3 I am not good with language or story building and stuff like that so I try to focus my stories on emotions and feelings. So you can imagine how happy it makes me to hear ( ... )
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I went through your pimp post and most of my favourite Woogyu fics were there, there's really too few Woogyu fiction... So I checked my memories and here are some fics I had saved, you may know them too but just in case: http://heehe.livejournal.com/14072.html http://xfragments.livejournal.com/7396.html http://700pm.livejournal.com/1515.html and basically anything myeongdong and quarticpolynomi have ever written and most of yaoiokami's fics too. And also not only because she's my friend but anirago at AFF, little_arale and lately at AFF too... Hmmmm that's what I can think about it now, hope you can find ( ... )
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Personally, i think that you saying things like "i regret posting this" it's really sad: i know, feedback is important, but still...It's your creation. Please don't understimate it or regret posting it. It also hurts to read since i liked it T_T
Please, keep on showing your works openly!
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But...I do try to show my thoughts on the guys real interactions or feelings I sense from observing them. Of course, that the yaoi in it is, well, fictional addition to it, I don't really think they do cross physical boundaries in real :)) And I just always wish that there would be person to come and say "wow! That's exactly what I think! What made you think this and that" you know? I know, I should just enjoy writing for myself, but honestly since I have the story happeing in my own mind playing nicely as a movie, why bother to write it down? I write it down because I wanna share it with others, of course....
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I am sorry there isn't enough of us who has the courtesy to show appreciation or who wants to interact in any sort of way.
Just...uhm.
It would be such a waste for us to not see your works anymore.
Sorry for saying this.
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dunno if u changed the formatting already but it's quite alright now :) now i just need to enlarge it cos my screen is too small lolol so dun worry too much it's not really the formatting's fault!
and please dun stop posting stories in the future! pwetty pwease? :)
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I think I won't stop, anyway. I did tell myself I will many times but I usually can't last longer than a year XD My mind is full of story ideas and there is always a break point when I need to get something out so I can concentrate on real life again properly :)
I am writing little Woggyu au for my other friend for Christmas, so I guess taht will follow. And sooner than in a year :) Watch out for it, I guess :)
Thanks for commenting <3
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