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Prov 41 / Quote

Feb 07, 2010 17:51

Title: Service Sector Vengeance
Author: Sensei
Rating: PG
Words: 433
Characters: Naraku POV
Summary: After reincarnation in the modern era, Naraku plots and schemes. So what else is new.

( Service Sector Vengeance )

salomesensei, prov 41

Comments 9

sunsingergirl February 8 2010, 01:54:47 UTC

LMAO.

The best part had to be his plans for her. Back alley hooker. *snortlaugh*

salomesensei February 8 2010, 14:17:07 UTC

Naraku is a dumbass. No denying it. ^_^

kiramaru7 February 8 2010, 02:22:59 UTC

*laughs*
to find he'd exuded a miasma that could not possibly be explained as gas from all that Taco Bell and Mountain Dew. Golden, Sensei!!

salomesensei February 8 2010, 14:17:29 UTC

Yes, I confess with some shame I was rather proud of that line. ^_^

kiramaru7 February 8 2010, 18:56:12 UTC

*giggles* It's a great a line; you should be!

enemytosleep February 8 2010, 20:46:25 UTC

XD Oh, Naraku. Employee rage just suits you so.

salomesensei February 9 2010, 02:25:16 UTC

I love the premise better than the follow-through on this one. The prov quote was a bit harder than I thought at first. Still, I do love torturing Naraku in crack fic.

kingbaka22 February 14 2010, 04:16:27 UTC

Yes, Kagura gets her revenge! And in a way that's comedic gold too! I just about lost it when you told us where Naraku works. XD

salomesensei February 14 2010, 16:33:30 UTC

Thank you! I think this one is a bit better in concept than follow-through, but it made me laugh writing it and the hubby likes it, so it's all good!