Comments | inception_slash: Fic: "Like Breathing", Arthur/Eames, NC-17 for extreme kink

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Fic: "Like Breathing", Arthur/Eames, NC-17 for extreme kink

Aug 16, 2010 12:44

Author: neomeruru
Title: Like Breathing
Rating: NC-17/R
Pairing: Arthur/Eames
Warnings: pure kink: breathplay, smoking, choking, snuff, pain, top!Arthur, not for the faint of heart
Spoilers: If you haven't watched the movie, you won't understand the spoilers.
Word Count: 3,332
Summary: "Do you want me to choke you to death, Eames?"
Disclaimer: I'm so, so ( Read more... )

kink: snuff, kink: breathplay, kink: power play, pairing: arthur/eames, genre: smut, rating: nc-17, genre: pwp, genre: dark, kink: top!arthur

Comments 41

zoi_no_miko August 17 2010, 09:04:12 UTC

I am so in love with your break from academic writing.

Just. Oh god. This is such an amazing kink and you've just completely aced it, it's so hot and emotional and dirty and wrong and so very, very right. <3 Thank you _very_ much. <3

kiri_moth August 18 2010, 02:38:15 UTC

I go for the heavy kink stuff, and while I've never been into actual snuff in fics (or as actual as it would be for still being ultimately fictional?), I really like the fact that the rules of this universe allow for the death fantasy to be played out.

Awesome story, very deftly written.

neomeruru August 18 2010, 03:26:08 UTC

Oh, I get it -- snuff and real character death isn't something I'm personally interested in (breathplay on the other hand, whoa boy), but I really wanted to explore what dying, over and over, would do to Eames and Arthur. Would they still treat it with reverence? Still with fear? Or with fear transmogrified into fetish? One of the ways we deal with great fear is to turn it into something more manageable, like kink.

And, added bonus, no one actually has to die, woo. I was drawn to the fact that it really is the ultimate safe play environment, and what that would mean to people who enter in and out of it as easily as we enter and leave our houses.

Thanks for the awesome comments!

kiri_moth August 18 2010, 03:31:08 UTC

I don't know if this was your intent, but what I read from it was that even if the death wasn't real, it was still a huge matter of trust between the two of them - let alone playing with dying.

But yeah, this fandom: best sandbox EVER.

neomeruru August 18 2010, 04:30:54 UTC

Yes, exactly! That's the feeling I was trying to 'show, not tell'. Glad you got it. :)

acidpop25 August 18 2010, 03:21:50 UTC

I have no words to review this. Um. Wow. Amazing work, it is twisted in all the right ways. *speechless*

canarypaper August 18 2010, 05:39:12 UTC

"...not the ha-ha-funny laugh but the I'm-going-to-fuck-you-until-you-die-from-it laugh..."

Yeah, I shivered at that line. This is just so... amazing in the most fucked-up-but-awesome kind of way. Nice job. :)

prairiestar August 18 2010, 05:44:43 UTC

First of all...
Eames was still harder than a double major with honours
I had to stop and read that bit again, and then it totally delighted me.

Secondly, I can't believe this is the first porn you've written. It's fanTAStic. Visceral and electric with all the right energy and action. These aren't my kinks, but I 100% believed that they were Eames' and Arthur's. You worked on the movie's core themes and coolest sci-fi ideas using a tool box full of perfectly fucked up sex. You should be super proud of your first foray into porn!