Fic: "Like Breathing", Arthur/Eames, NC-17 for extreme kink

[neomeruru]

Author: neomeruru
Title: Like Breathing
Rating: NC-17/R
Pairing: Arthur/Eames
Warnings: pure kink: breathplay, smoking, choking, snuff, pain, top!Arthur, not for the faint of heart
Spoilers: If you haven't watched the movie, you won't understand the spoilers.
Word Count: 3,332
Summary: "Do you want me to choke you to death, Eames?"
Disclaimer: I'm so, so

Comments

[ilovetakahana]

There is so much that is WRONG and HOT about this story.

Eames was still harder than a double major with honours, even through the pain.

That's quite some metaphor and it is DELICIOUS.

I think the ending is so adorable and strange - it seems to fit Eames like a glove.

[neomeruru]

First comment on a porno, ever, yay!

*showers you with adoration*

[seussian]

That was intense and beautiful in the strangest way. Breathplay is a super kink of mine, and I'm so happy to see it in this fandom!! LOVE IT!

[vivaraquelita]

I don't share the interest in the main kinks here (that is, breathplay, snuff, and pain) but this was still an enjoyable read. The characterization, which can easily be lost in a fic like this, is spot-on and I really commend you for that!

[neomeruru]

Well, thanks! I really tried to keep it in character -- writing in Eames' voice is really just deliciously fun. And I commend you for soldiering through a fic with a kink you care nothing about. :)

[limbotourist]

Normal people shouldn't appreciate it as much as I did; luckly for both of us I'm nothing like a normal person.
This was beyond hottness and this ending was just too cute °3°

[neomeruru]

Oh my god, is that a kissy-face? *adore*

[limbotourist]

Yeah ^^
Kissy-face for you °3°

[candesgirl]

I enjoyed everything about this fic. Eames and Arthur are both perfectly done and you handled the content amazingly. Thank you so much for writing this so beautifully.