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[100_tales] Careless Whisper

Jan 09, 2011 15:46

Title: Careless Whisper
Author: defy_n_gravity
Prompt: 100_tales: 84. Watching
Characters: Eliot Spencer/Parker, with Sophie Devereaux and Alec Hardison
Rating: T
Words: 1498
Disclaimer: I have no claim on Leverage or any of it's characters. Just using them for fun, no harm is intended.
Warning: n/a
Author's Notes: Set between S2 and 3. I've always been on the fence ( Read more... )

[character] alec hardison, [series] careless whispers, [character] sophie devereaux, [character] eliot spencer, [character] parker, [pairing] parker/eliot spencer, [community] 100_tales, [claim] general, [fandom] leverage

Comments 18

iluvroadrunner6 January 9 2011, 21:37:17 UTC

Awww, Parker. I really liked this too.

defy_n_gravity January 9 2011, 21:42:07 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Yeah....now I just have to....figure out damage control. She's not too willing to work with me.

iluvroadrunner6 January 9 2011, 22:21:55 UTC

/pets her You'll figure it out.

defy_n_gravity January 9 2011, 22:26:48 UTC

I hope so.

rockerbaby423 January 10 2011, 03:39:52 UTC

Poor Parker! Eliot needs to go after her and convince her that he does in fact like her. I really love this fic, it's adorable and the palpable tension between them is great. I think my favorite part was how Eliot responded to Parker in the beginning, when they were dancing.

You did a great job writing both Eliot and Parker in-character and trust me, I know how, um...difficult they can be to work with! haha

Lauren

defy_n_gravity January 10 2011, 04:01:23 UTC

Ah yes, but it is not easy to convince Eliot to do anything.

But I am very glad you liked it! Thank you for commenting :)

rockerbaby423 January 10 2011, 04:46:53 UTC

No, it's really not...I've been having a battle of wills with Eliot for some time now trying to coerce him into a third part for one of my fics, and thus far he's winning.

Do you think you'll add more to this or just leave it as it stands?

defy_n_gravity January 10 2011, 05:10:52 UTC

Awww, I hope you can win him over for your fic!

Honestly, I haven't written a lot of Eliot before, and this was the most "into his head" that I've written in my fics of him. For some reason even though I never before was sold on the pairing, he just had a lot going in his head about her. Then again, she's my favorite. I really don't know if I'll write more. I think I want to if I can figure out where to go from here.

Thread 6

gelbes_gilatier January 16 2011, 18:22:48 UTC

Aw, poor Eliot :( But then again, he could have spelled it out for her sooner... maybe she would have listened ;) I'm alreay excited to see what the second part will bring :)

defy_n_gravity January 16 2011, 18:58:04 UTC

Haha, yeah, but this is Eliot. Thank you for reading!

madjm January 16 2011, 18:46:22 UTC

I really like this. It feels like it could be a real situation on "Leverage," and both of the characters seem dead on. I'd love to see a sequel. :)

defy_n_gravity January 16 2011, 18:58:29 UTC

Awww, thank you!

deansangelanna January 16 2011, 20:52:08 UTC

awww kinda sad, kinda cute. i always saw e/p going that way though - realizing something cuz of a job.

and good point on the eye contact, that'd be a big step for them.

great job!

defy_n_gravity January 17 2011, 05:09:56 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.