EXO || grow up (Chanyeol/Tao)

[idolkiller]

grow up
Chanyeol/Tao
NC-17, ~6k.
warnings: dubcon

Chanyeol never thinks much about Zitao.

(continuation of Seventy-Two - premise run-down: fuck-or-die version of 48 hours. EXO have been kidnapped and Kris and Kai drugged with a fatal aphrodisiac; 2 members are randomly selected every 6 hours and must sleep together to get temporary doses of the

Comments

[one_if_by_land]

I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU WROTE THIS i can't believe how into this hateship you just made me he's still clenching, like his body has already learned to yearn in Chanyeol's absence I CAN'T BELIEVE HOW MUCH I HATE YOU

[idolkiller]

GO AWAY I HOPE YOU SKIMMED 78% OF THIS

[one_if_by_land]

you already know my reading habits for porn, no need for concern u___u

[idolkiller]

u put up with so much for me, most supportive unni u___u

[warmboys]

Let me um try to compose myself. Where to begin?! First of all, the amount of psychology you squeezed into 6k of mostly porn. Chanyeol wanting to "best him" was simultaneously an awesome motive and maybe self-defense tactic?? The way certain lines are dropped casually but offer staggering insight into their characters ;__; That one line where Tao's like "you can do anything" and Chanyeol gets what's lost in translation but can't help being all hot and bothered by it especially. Also I don't know how you did it but this was SO FUNNY. There were parts that fjdlak legit killed me, like
all twelve of them sealed in a seamless, smothering cube sobs SM...
Maybe having sex with Joonmyun would be a little awkward. now that you've brought it up, I want this...
but barring Kris on most days Chanyeol's pretty sure he leads the pack jflskd
and then stuff like self-reliant and tender as a heartache which, noooo wave of emotions ;_;
all the while being super hot?? curving to touch his stomach was almost tmth T_T and how ambitious Tao is when he

[idolkiller]

crying omg get out this is too generous for 6k of gratuituous everything laksdjlfaksjdf chanyeol's pov is fun though (like idr think tao had a crush on him in this universe, maybe some brief 'oh he's hot' but the rest is lol chanyeol), LIKE yes one of those things where you want something to be hurting/under your control(--but also i just like to see/make ppl cry????) GOD IDK TYSM I'M RLY GLAD YOU LIKED IT ;-------;

SCREAMS omfg the cube part was unintentional but now i can't stop laughing, brb resetting this so that 72 hours is actually the grueling account of how long it takes them to film their new mv and the lengths they must go to in sm's basement boxes

WHY ALWAYS SUHO if u rly want it tho u kno what to do

[becquinho]

!!!!!!!! SCREAMS INTO HANDS BECAUSE SEEING THIS AFTER SO LONG SPENT SULKING OVER FANDOM HAVING NO TASTE FOR NOT CARING ABOUT CHANTAO AHHHHHHH PERFECT END TO THE DAY

YOU GIVE ME HOPE..AND MANY FEELS

♡♡

[idolkiller]

als;kdjf so unexpected, idk how u found this BUT I'M RLY GLAD YOU LIKED IT *_____* EVERYONE SHOULD CARE ABOUT CHANTAO CHANTAO IS SO ATTRACTIVE???? so much good tension waiting to be sliced a billion different ways aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh THANK YOU for reading :3

[threewalls]

Wow. This is so full of subtle touches of characterisation, and doesn't pull any punches about what they're going through in this situation.

[idolkiller]

wow, thank you! this comment is like everything i want this fic to be, so ;~; i'm glad you liked it!

[colorfunk]

lj user idolkiller i don't really know how to leave cmnts on porn but... this is so great??? your chanyeol pov and all the shit he thinks (Zitao isn't a martyr auuugh) and says ("You're so flexible" stfu chanyeol) is so pitch perfect, his anger and wanting to wrangle control and power from sex when in the situation itself he's powerless. and your taooo ahhh i love him as seen by chanyeol, how bad he gets under his skin, i can't believe you made tao cry and made me love it, i'm usually rly wary... and i dunno but this entire part Chanyeol accustomed to action and taking the lead, Zitao self-reliant and tender as a heartache etc is absurdly good and just bits like that you work in so neatly in the middle of... really hot porn /__\ ok i'm out THANK YOU for writing and sharing i rly loved this

[idolkiller]

SCREAM NO DONT WORRY neither do i... writing it too, orz i was so taken by the idea of chantao's dynamic in this kind of situation and i like the idea of characterization via sex but the porn itself was like pulling fingernails aldkjf ugh ugh i'm so happy that you liked all of those things, chanyeol was so much fun to write through, to me it feels like his pov makes the whole thing just slightly unreliable and meaner than objectively necessary. i'm really glad his displaced frustration came through?! tao was just an easy scapegoat u__u so gentle u___u i love him so much but it's easy for me to understand how he might rub an anti the wrong way (i'll still kill them tho hdthey >:[) so maybe i was just ghost projecting

[colorfunk]

cries at how chanyeol's an anti but omfg i get the worst protective feelings about tao, he's literally who my little bro will be in five years so reading this was like chanyeol go suck a dick u dick but actually i rly loved that the most about this?? i forgot to mention it but then it was half an hr later and editing my cmnt would be weird sob BUT i love when a pov's biases get the chance to shine through, like these pieces of great tao characterization that get filtered through chanyeol so they're a bit twisted and mean

[idolkiller]

SCREAM OMG chanyeol the anti, i want this fic. but yes ikr i have that problem with all of chinaline alksdjf they all match up to ppl in my life so i'm just like ;~~~~~~; I'LL BE DEFENSIVE ABT YOU UNTIL I'M BLUE IN THE FACE. omg i love unreliable narrators the most, sometimes i feel like third person omniscient is just a waste bc pov is such a great tool!!! it's right there for you!! completely not talking about my fic rn obvs, but its influence on the story and the clues to it, it's like mirrors in mirrors, everything gets a little warped. ~*~*~stories~*~*~