Title: Code Blue Part III (7/?)
Fandom: xxxHOLiC
Wordcount: 4,254
A/N: Okay, I really have no excuse for how late this one is. And I dislike the ending. :/
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Hopefully that encompasses the wide range of emotions this fic is making me go through. I am doing the Wataflail over here.
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XD I think you got the point across.
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I've been remiss about telling you how much I love this series. The world building is lovely and the characters are spot-on.
Also, you win my heart for a scene with both Yuzuriha AND Kentarou.
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Aw, well, thanks now. I was really afraid that I'd butchered them this chapter, though. Kentarou was easy, but the others kept wanting to channel my NaNo characters. ><
How could I not include them? And they had to be two of the happy ones. I love them too much to leave them out.
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No, given the world, everyone was very in-character. Kamui being a douche, Doumeki doing something Watanuki might have massively disagreed with, Kentarou being emotional...it was great.
I know! Now I want to write Yuzuriha + Kentarou Piffleworld friendship fic. Agh.
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You think so? I'm very relieved, then. XD Kamui is such a douche. I love that bastard.
You totally should! It would be adorable, and no one writes their gen. Which is really depressing.
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AND THE REST OF IT. VERY MUCH. they were very cute, huddling together for warmth like that. ♥ also, y'know, the whole residential base thing? WIN.
how do you always restore my interest in these fandoms, omg.
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:D Why thanks. Well, I mean, there had to be civilians, right? And obviously the top of a very cold mountain is the best place to keep a fortress full of civilians.
I dunno. Magic? :D
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Made my day to see this chapter posted and really the ending wasn't that bad.
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