LJ Idol Friends and Rivals - week 11: Monkey's Paw - Wishes gone wrong

Feb 26, 2016 21:57

If you had one wish - what would it be ( Read more... )

writing, fiction, ljidol, creepy

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halfshellvenus February 28 2016, 06:19:01 UTC
I love that you have a "creepy" tag, and that you used it for this.

If this were how wishes truly worked, when they were granted, then yes-- you're wreaking havoc with every one of them, and who knows what price is being paid? :O

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favoritebean February 28 2016, 07:47:00 UTC
Oh, this is super creepy. Especially given that when anyone tells me to make a wish, "I wish I was a fish," immediately pops into my head before I can stop it. I would imagine that would be instant death, unless were were at the ocean.

What would I wish for? Given for the possibility, I generally wish for goodness in all. I reckon that would come with a steep price tag. But if it meant no strife or war, I might be willing to make whatever sacrifice required.

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rayaso February 28 2016, 17:58:15 UTC
I agree -- this is delightfully creepy! Next time I make a wish, I'll wonder about the price. Gee, thanks!

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ellison February 28 2016, 21:15:29 UTC
Wow this was really impactful in such a short space, well done!

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uselesstinrelic February 28 2016, 22:40:24 UTC
Poor kids! All i can see is kids blowing dandelion puffs and then melting away with them.

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sinnamongirl February 28 2016, 22:51:17 UTC
Ooh, now I wonder if I've been trading stuff for years and never realized it. I'm going to have to pause now before ever thinking "I wish..." again :) Good entry!

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