I'll Be There; Primeval

Jul 23, 2011 01:17

Title: I'll Be There
Authors: mydoctortennant
Pairings/Characters: Jess/Becker, Lester
Warnings: Spoilers for 5x06
Disclaimer: Not real. Despite birthday wishes and night time prayers to Santa (all Hail Amy Pond!) Merlin still isn't mine!
Rating: PG13
Summary: A rewrite of the end of 5x06
Author Notes: Written for the just-kiss-her 'Medical Bay' prompt tag for the prompt "“ ( Read more... )

♦ primeval, ♥ jess/becker

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mercscilla July 23 2011, 00:49:48 UTC
Lester totally ships Becker/Jess. *nods*

Awww, Jess is truly the heart and soul of the lot. I love how she views Lester as a father-figure, it fits right into the show. :)

And Becker! Her silent warrior who's always there for her. That scene is my favourite. ♥

It's perfect. <3

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mydoctortennant July 23 2011, 13:46:08 UTC
*Jess moment* Well obviously.

She really. She is the hub of the operation on all fronts.

Always there for her.

Thanks Mercy <3

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mercscilla July 24 2011, 18:25:38 UTC
^___________^

I love your stories. So, so much! ♥

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hiddencait July 23 2011, 01:16:25 UTC
Oh this was lovely! Awesome how she totally knew who was there beside her even before Becker asked how lester was doing.

And the comment about Lester's daughter and Jess totally made sense. It's like it should totally be cannon in my head!

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mydoctortennant July 23 2011, 13:48:27 UTC
Sometimes you just know who is there.

In my head Lester is about the same age as my Dad, and thus has a daughter roughly my age (19 is only 6 months out XD) so it totally fits in head canon. Cause she would have been about 15 around the time he mentioned taking the mammoth home, and I know at 15 I would have loved a mammoth.

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anonyme1 July 23 2011, 01:18:06 UTC
Love this! *sigh*

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mydoctortennant July 23 2011, 13:48:47 UTC
Thanks my dear <3

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honestlysweet July 23 2011, 04:05:17 UTC
*flail*
This is PERFECT! Everyone was in character.
I loved Jess. The opening was brilliant, you captured her emotions so well!
And her refusing to leave Lester was so touching.
"He's like a father to me"- I cried at that line! :')
And the fact that Becker knew about their father/daughter relationship was so adorable.
Becker being comforting needs to be in more fics! *swoon*
And, of course, the kiss! *squee*
And the Lester sarcasm! *snicker*
The ending was so cute! Don't be arguing with Jess xD
This fic is amazing and you are amazing for writing it! *hugs*

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mydoctortennant July 23 2011, 13:51:03 UTC
=D I'm glad you liked it my dear =D

I was sat here acting it all out. Luckily it was about 1am and Mum was in bed. (My Dad's away and my sister doesn't live with us any more) *wipes brow*

<3

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reseda_3067 July 23 2011, 12:41:49 UTC
Aww, loved it! Couldn´t help, but smile.

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mydoctortennant July 23 2011, 13:51:23 UTC
Yey =]
Glad you like it, thanks for reading x

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