FIC for: slytherin_face

[bewarethesmirk]

Title: A Momentary Lapse
Recipient: slytherin_face
Fic or Art: Fic
Rating:PG
Characters: Narcissa, Lucius, Augustus, Bellatrix, Draco
Summary: Draco's birthday causes celebration, but still, politics must move on.

Comments

[slytherin_face]

OMG I LOVE THIS SOOO MUCH!!! Both your Narcissa and your Lucius are just perfect!!! And I've never read a fic with Augustus Rookwood in it, but I must say you really have me liking his character a lot! This is just so wonderful! Thanks, mystery author! I can't wait for the reveal so I can read more of your work!

[slytherin_face]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. It seemed the way things would go, mixing business and pleasure among the Death Eaters, so I'm glad it came out well!

I'm finding I enjoy Lucius/Narcissa as a pairing, their dynamics are so beautiful.

[humantales]

For all their hatred and prejudice, Lucius and Narcissa love their son. Which you showed beautifully. I also liked your depiction of Bellatrix, and her own longing for a child. Nicely done.

[humantales]

Yes, for all their faults, they love their son and each other, I'm convinced, so I'm glad that showed.

I figured that Bellatrix does have some longing there. Very few women don't, so even if she didn't have her own maternal longing, she would long to produce another pureblood.

Thank you.

[shiiki]

Ooh, very nice! I like the look you've given us into the other side of society - the Death Eaters. It's an interesting background you've shown us for Draco, really, and a nice look into the motivations of the Death Eaters.

I like how Narcissa has always had Draco at the forefront of her mind.

[enchantedescape]

THank you so much!!!! I really enjoyed this, but it's so nice to hear other people enjoyed it as well!

[lazy_neutrino]

An intriguing look at the other side, as someone has already said, with some lovely politics going on. I like the careful 'layers' of plotting and framing!

[enchantedescape]

Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed!