12 {2/2 - bap au oneshot}

May 05, 2013 17:10

title: 12 {2/2}
author: himawarixxsandz
rating: pg-13
pairing(s): banghim, himlo
summary: three-hundred sixty-five days
a/n: i mean to be fair in /not mine/ zelo got the short end so i mean

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zelo, himchan, daehyun, jieun, bap, secret, himlo, banghim, yongguk

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iridae May 7 2013, 00:12:18 UTC
SPOTTING BECAUSE JUST THE A/N IS MAKING ME PANIC OH GOD DANIE PLEASE NO PLEASE DONT

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iridae May 7 2013, 00:27:00 UTC
DANIE.

D A N I E.

I CAN'T EVEN BEGIN TO... OH MY GOD.

WHY.

so remember when I told you angst never upsets me I fUCKING TAKE IT BACK OH GOD DANIE WHY

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shuuji_nemo May 7 2013, 01:49:08 UTC
"a/n: i mean to be fair in /not mine/ zelo got the short end so i mean"
No. NO. I don't want to read this anymore. Stop. DON'T WANNA!! >.<;
*off to read anyway*

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shuuji_nemo May 7 2013, 02:17:00 UTC
Oh. Jieun. Oh, okay, other OTP, maybe you can escape being strangled with Gukkie's instestines then. Just because I like Gukkie too much for that, mind you, not because I'm okay with this fic (lol okay what's okay can I eat it? ;A;)
Pity it took so long for them to realize it was over though, I mean, I kinda understand because they're so perfect for each other that it's hard to believe that it just doesn't work anymore, but it's okay to fall out of love, it happens, and sometimes you can't help it (and I mean between a boyfriend you keep fighting with and the perfect intern who even gives up on his dance teaching time to help you grade the assignments YOU SHOULD HAVE GRADED OVER THE WEEKEND KIM HIMCHAN WHAT KIND OF TEACHER ARE YOU YOU SLACKER?!, how obvious can this choice be?) but but but IT STILL HURTS! D ( ... )

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mischievousb May 7 2013, 19:12:17 UTC
i take it that i can't trust you on 'this one's not sad' I WAS KIND OF A SOBBING MESS AFTER I FINISHED
bb i'm sorry i can't be detailed on this one bc usually when i comment on your fics, i reread them
and i don't think i'm ready for another ride of emotions ;A;
I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU DONE THIS, breaking banghim apart YY________YY i knew this was gonna happen but not so soon lmaothis ones very different from the 'not mine' cause in not mine i told you i was confused of who to root for ( ... )

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flameflowerful May 8 2013, 02:46:38 UTC
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

akfdhakdhaaaaaaaa
you attack me with feels with your relationship fics almost everysingleeverysingle TIME

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

maybe they really could have been perfect together in some other world, in another time, in another life
AND THAT.
Favorite.

It felt like some parts /were/ deja vu in comparison with the other bap fic
like them fighting (oh god the fight scenes felt so realistic and painful) and not being able to stop fighting

and the little moments
from them getting together. and it's so nice to see a year later how they're gradually healing
it's so freaking bittersweet

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almostblue May 8 2013, 18:12:59 UTC
I really want to leave something that reflects how I can actually write like a human being but oh my god, you just broke my heart in the best way possible and OW OW OW jesus christ how was that so good and so REAL and so painful all at once ;_______; I loved the structure, I loved the little snippets of life that we got, and I loved the way you portrayed so perfectly the way a relationship ends and begins and cycles through until it's over. OW. MY HEART. OW.

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