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magicmumu December 27 2010, 05:03:44 UTC
Oh no you don’t! No one can defeat the hacking masta!”

Olive and Claudia are so much alike. How does Claudia know that the other hacker is a chick? That was a good question, Artie!

“I’m mad? What about you and you’re ‘destroy the world’ bit? I’m mad. You have reached into that darkness. I’ve seen it. If I’m mad, then you are a bloody head-case.”

Crazy Bitch has a point.

The image of the linesa of the keyboard on her forehead is a funny one. Hm... I am not sure how I feel about this Olive chick. She seems a bit like a Mary Sue character who is just everywhere and good at everything and somehow knows all. We will see.

Erin

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hewaech1229 December 27 2010, 05:17:39 UTC
Dont worry Olive has a point in the story that will come clear later!!

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magicmumu December 27 2010, 05:25:46 UTC
I know. Mary Sues always do. She isn't over the top Mary Sue, though, so she is tolerable. some writers who are new to fanfic (myself included a long ass time ago) have them perfect and good at everything and blah blah blah, and that gets old and annoying if you've read enbough of them, which I have, lol.

Erin

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hewaech1229 December 27 2010, 05:32:03 UTC
Ok good I dont want her to be over the top!! please let me know if she starts getting super annoying!

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