Comments | hewaech1229: With Her Wrist I Tremble Ch 1

hewaech1229

With Her Wrist I Tremble Ch 1

Dec 26, 2010 18:09

Myka turned toward her lover, pain etched on her face. “You are lying to yourself. You never wanted this. If you wanted to kill Pete and me, you would have done it in Warehouse 2 or in Paris and Artie, you would have let him die in Russia, but you didn’t ( Read more... )

hg wells, helena wells, warehouse 13, myka bering

Comments 5

magicmumu December 27 2010, 00:38:15 UTC

HOLY SHIT!! That is a good first chapter. I love your writing style! I love the description of the blood i the sink and the way Myka had felt. The last part with Helena was like WHOA, and I can't wait to see where you take this story!

Erin

hewaech1229 December 27 2010, 00:51:55 UTC

YAY! Im glad you like it!! haha

synergyfox March 29 2011, 04:57:48 UTC

Serious love for this first chapter, I especially liked this particular line via Helena.

“So it is you, who is to decide my fate. Are you a god now?”

hewaech1229 March 29 2011, 16:33:42 UTC

Thanks! Im so glad you like it! And yea I was trying to be kind of philosophical. My favorite line I wrote is the "I envy the dead" line which I dont think is in this chapter

synergyfox March 29 2011, 19:50:32 UTC

Oh, yeah yeah :D I read that line in another chapter. Super love for it.