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[Bleach] Setting Sun, Rising Moon (6/12)

Sep 13, 2007 17:00

Title: Setting Sun, Rising Moon (part 6 of 12)
Rating: PG for this chapter
Word Count: 4,036
Summary: Half a century ago, Ichigo became a substitute shinigami while he was still alive. At the end of that life, it's time to become the real thing, but with death comes unexpected challenges-not the least of which is that presented by seeing Rukia ( Read more... )

ichigo/rukia, rukia, ichigo, setting sun rising moon, ukitake, renji, bleach

Comments 41

loveotter September 13 2007, 21:47:44 UTC

Reeeeeeeeenjiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii. *heart*

Awww I feel so bad for him now. XD He's the sweetest guy ever.

I mean, I still want her to end up with Ichigo but Reeeenjiiiiiiiiiii. ;-;

You wrote him really well. Sometimes I'm "ehh" on Renji as you know but I love him to little pieces in this fic.

Also (oh yeah, this is an Ichiruki fic 8D) the fight scene earlier in the chapter was kinda hot. Darn them for not making out!

Goooood stuff! Stop making me wait so long! DX

jaina September 17 2007, 14:06:26 UTC

I want to cuddle Renji in just about every 'verse. He is truly love's bitch.

XD I will do my best but editing takes time!

kasenshiki September 13 2007, 22:27:58 UTC

this was goooooooooooooooooooodddd!!!! I loved this chapter. And how clueless Ichigo is XD it's just so endearing. And more backstory, yay! =D Good luck on your next chapter!

morphine_gloss September 14 2007, 19:00:36 UTC

BEAUTIFUL, jaina! absolutely lovely. Ack! Renji...wow. This is such an amazing fic, I can't wait to read the next chapter! more more more! :-)

Oh, and kasenshiki? your icon made me squee myself hoarse.

kasenshiki September 14 2007, 20:21:39 UTC

jaina September 17 2007, 14:25:48 UTC

Thank you! :D There will be more Renji to come.

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loquaciousquark September 13 2007, 23:23:21 UTC

So good! I love how you write these characters. Fr some reason, I'd really love to see Rukia's reaction to Ichigo/giggling girls interaction. I think it'd be priceless.

Fight scene was great. And Renji! *sadface* 33 years ago, though...I wonder!

jaina September 17 2007, 14:29:30 UTC

Thanks! Ha, she'd probably laugh her ass off and embarrass him further.

Yeah, it's been a while, hasn't it? ;)

twistedsheets10 September 13 2007, 23:56:24 UTC

Renji! *hearts* I knew there was something going on. :D

Dammit! Now I'll be rooting for him, but I want Rukia to end with...Ichigo!

Love, love this fic and you.

jaina September 17 2007, 14:30:28 UTC

Thank you! <3 I hope the end satisfies you when it comes.

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jaina September 17 2007, 14:32:45 UTC

In my pants I had to go to utenatai for sword fight help, because I am teh dumb when it comes to that. It was fun to write! As for what she sees...IT IS A SECRET. Ichigo, you must save her from running into Renji's arms!~

...maaaaaaybe. :D

jaina September 14 2007, 14:59:41 UTC

ILU2 BB