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jaina in herdedcats

[Bleach] Blood Roses

Jun 28, 2007 10:03

June's bleach_flashfic entry for justcallmeziggy. Aizen+/Hinamori, character introspection. Thingy. Thanks to scathachdhu for beta.

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( It's her first day as a full-fledged shinigami and Momo is as nervous as she's ever been. )

blood roses, aizen, hinamori, drama, aizen/hinamori, flashfic, bleach

Comments 11

incandescens June 28 2007, 16:11:16 UTC

That's a lovely piece of work.

jaina July 5 2007, 19:05:33 UTC

Thank you very much! Poor Momo. I keep hoping she'll make it through this thing okay, but I worry.

justcallmeziggy June 28 2007, 17:58:45 UTC

First of all, let me start by saying that I apologize for the vagueness of my request, but I'm thoroughly for introspection. :D

To the meat of things- WOW! Seriously, very well done. It is rare that I am moved by fanfiction, but this was certainly the exception. I got chills at the end, for god sake. All the same, I thank you very muchly.

jaina July 5 2007, 19:10:05 UTC

I admit the Kill Bill thing had me a little o_O but yay! I am glad you like introspection. And yay! I am very glad you like, and very relieved. I struggled with it a lot. I hope things turn out better for Momo in canon than they do here (though I suppose it's not so bad compared to some fics I've read.)

silverharmony June 29 2007, 11:46:10 UTC

That is so stunningly beautiful. Thank you so much for writing this. This pairing is far too rare.

jaina July 5 2007, 19:10:35 UTC

Thank you very much :) Their relationship is such a twisted-up mess of interesting.

starvinbohemian June 29 2007, 20:08:38 UTC

What kind of love can she say she has if she has no faith to go with it?

Oh, Momo. Momo, Momo, Momo. :(

Absolutely love the ending.

jaina July 5 2007, 19:11:22 UTC

I want to cuddle her. :( Really, I want things to turn out better for her than this! And I'm glad you like the ending. I thought it was sort of a cop-out on my part, but I like your reaction better. ;)

starvinbohemian July 5 2007, 20:16:11 UTC

Hmn. I don't really see how it could be considered a cop-out, unless you mean by having even the slightest bit of hope for Momo's future. ;) Desolate endings are a bleak, wonderful thing, but I don't think they are absolutely necessary for something to be a non-cop-out. Now, if Aizen had confessed his undying love before, you know, dying, and then Hinamori had walked away totally empowered... That'd be different. ^^;

ficwize April 21 2008, 16:30:51 UTC

Here via remixredux08 and this fic is really good. I enjoyed it a lot!

Aizen/Momo is such an interesting (and FUBAR) pairing. You captured the highlights so precisely. Brilliant job.

jaina April 21 2008, 17:25:47 UTC

Thanks! I'm always happy when people seem to like it, since I was not too sure of it myself when I wrote it. XD The FUBAR of this pairing is the best part in my opinion.