Exodus - A Fanfic

[darkseraphim410]

Title: Exodus
Status: Complete
Rated: M for sex and violence

This story takes place just after chapter 95... I mean, this would be the next page if I was writing the manga which I am not. *sight*  Don't read unless you have read the manga. Please comment  here or on fanfiction.net

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4776111/1/Exodus

Comments

[hellsing999]

Okay, i read until the half of the second chapter until i didn`t like it anymore.
You make Seras look like a whimp even though she had thirty years to become nearly as powerful as Alucard and Heinkel like... i don`t know. Something between a child molester and something else.
Either way, i don`t like it. Sorry.

[deadseraphim89]

I have never understood the obsession with Vampintegra.

[stuntcupid]

This.

[sir_hellsing]

Because it's interesting to explore. Anime wise, specially, it's the only logical outcome to me. Manga wise, it's debatable since Alucard and Seras WANT her a vampire and she was teasing about it at the end.

Personally, I find interesting to explore what could leave Integra into that and what/how will be her emotional and state evolution. The challenge became different now Alucard is yet another type of vampire, one that is a "man" and not a "monster" like before.

[deadseraphim89]

I don't see it. The entire manga, when offered the chance to become a vampire, she's denied it visciously. And I do not think Alucard would do it, either - I think he teases about it, but he has such great respect for humans, and the beauty of old age, that I don't think he'd allow it to happen... not by his hand at least.

tl;dr: Vampintegra is completely and totally OOC, no matter which angle you use.

[nataleafrost]

I must say I loved your conclusion about chapter 95. What I liked about it was it certain felt like something similar could have happened in the manga. You made your fanfic flow nicely from the ending. Also having a little girl similar to Integra as a catalyst to finally say it out loud was a great idea. It made her remember how she was once like that.

The one thing that caught me off guard a bit was how Heinkel had children as the soldiers. I can definitely see Heinkel wanting revenge for Father Anderson's, and Yumie's death. I'm not too sure though about the children. Then again they seemed to be old enough to understand in the manga. Also I agree with hellsing999 on Seras's part. She is much more stronger in the end, and it seemed like she was the kitten again when we first saw her. Other than that though I applaud you for keeping everyone in character. Excellent job.

Thanks

[darkseraphim410]

Thank you. Let me explain a few things.

One:
I was watching the TV show "24" when I first started to write the fanfic. The show made me think about some of the most horrible human errors in the history of warfare. One error that came to mind was that many times in history, countries used children as soldiers including in some Christian wars. So that's where the idea of the child soldiers came from. In a sense, Integra herself is a child solider although she fought the war against the undead.

Two:
This fanfic was really not about Seras so I didn't pay much attention to her. What I wanted to do was to show that Alucard was protective of Integra during the story. So much so that he lost his anger with Seras. She wasn't important in the story but it would have been impossible to not have her in the story if I was using chapter 95 as a starting point.

Again, a thanks to all who commented on the fanfic.

[master_integral]

Although Im not 100% for Integra becoming a vampire, I really enjoyed this story. I really do love your Hellsing stories! They all are very good!

All the risque scenes made me blush ^_^. They were so well written! Very lovely.

[demona1]

Ah, I was looking for a post-Romancia fic, and where Integra turns into a vampire! And.. did she fake her death? (because I didn't quiet get it) Anyway, that's exactly how I imagined it would happen! Her faking death, and then probably three of them leaving the old life behind. I even had a fanart in mind :D