The Correct Way to Fantasize -- Harry/Draco, R

[kowaiyoukai]

Title: The Correct Way to Fantasize
Author: kowaiyoukai
Rating: R, maybe? Dark themes, but nothing is shown. But it’s also fluffy.
Word Count: 3,167
Challenge (Recipient, keywords, and dialogue): doomette, sunshine, strangers, silence, “Meat, Madam. Meat.”
Summary: Of all the fantasies he had ever had about Harry, the last one he ever wanted to really happen was this

Comments

[lokifan]

The POVs on this are hilarious, especially Harry's thoughts at the beginning. The description of being captured and the silence was really chilling and realistic. I love the ending too - “Stay bloody still when an injured person is trying to kiss you!”

[kowaiyoukai]

Thanks a lot! I'm so glad you liked it--and I thought the ending was fun, too. :P

[teas_me]

so... good work on the prompts ESPECIALLY the line of dialog. After listening to you wonder how you'd do that, I'm glad to see how you actually did. But I have one thing to ask.... what exactly happened to Draco, or do we not wanna know?

[kowaiyoukai]

YOU ARE IN TROUBLE. Where is your spn_monthylfic fic? HMM?!

Yeah, I think the dialogue worked out okay here. And, uh, I left out what happened to Draco because I didn't want to up the rating or squick anyone who wasn't into torture. Poor Draco. *snuggles*

[kowaiyoukai]

Drat. I meant spn_monthlyfic. Drat.

[teas_me]

RE: spn_monthlyfic:

Power outage last night. Didn't get to finish :( Will be done tonight. I SWEAR!

[doomette]

This is so awesome, I love it a lot. And by 'a lot' I mean 'like burning'. Haha I am so impressed that you managed to shove that dialogue in - and in such an excellent way! If I had a hat, I'd take it off to you, seriously, this fic is so much win. The ending was adorable, the descriptions of Draco when he's captured are creepy, your characters are awesome and perfect.

<333

[kowaiyoukai]

YAY!! *does happy twirls*

I have to say, you really gave me a problem with that line of dialogue. I was like, uh, whiskey tango and foxtrot? But I think it worked out okay--at least better than my other ideas, which all sucked really bad! :P

Thanks a lot! I'm glad you enjoyed it! ^_^*

[harrysexmagick]

I loved this! Your use of the Dialogue was brilliant

Dolohov chuckled from his place slightly behind and to the left of Bellatrix. “Meat, Madam. Meat.” His tongue flicked out, slowly moving across his upper lip. Dolohov bared his teeth as Bellatrix moved aside to let him pass.
I loved that so dark!
Hero Harry! and this line

“You bloody idiot!” Draco shouted, then winced at the pain in his throat. “Stay bloody still when an injured person is trying to kiss you!”

[kowaiyoukai]

:D Thanks a bunch! I'm glad you liked it!

Yeah, I thought the dialogue line was sort-of seamless there. And Draco's line at the end was so amusing to me when I wrote it. Glad you enjoyed it! ^_^*

[asnowyowl]

I loved Draco's 'romance novel' train of thought. Too funny! Great job in getting that line of dialogue in the story. I LOL'd at your other ideas.
~~Ann

[kowaiyoukai]

Thanks a lot! I'm glad you liked it! ^_^*