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It's All Relative 24

Jan 13, 2010 17:44

It’s All Relative 24
Author: hawkbehere (hawkbehere2@yahoo.com)
Rated PG
Summary: A short chapter. Let’s get this party started…

A/N: Sorry so short. Love to Rosemary for the once over. I adore the English. Always have, actually, but that’s another and lifelong story. All mistakes are mine. Love to Z and to Martha.

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kdsusa3 January 13 2010, 23:27:18 UTC

Rock on!!! I laughed my ass off during this one. Wonderful sense of humor darlin'. This line: “We will crush them like roaches.” Caused a spit take. I was wiping soda off the monitor.

hawkbehere January 14 2010, 02:24:38 UTC

KD!! Always love hearing from my big leaf. I'm so happy you enjoyed it. I've cleaned my monitor so many times it's a crime.

Good look, sweetheart.

xenavirgin January 13 2010, 23:51:09 UTC

OMG. Seriously, OMG. That was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo amazingly WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!

Reading along slight smiles, grins and just enjoying Miranda in all her wonderfulness. Then wham, the idea of a "Runway Crush", yowsa! Then EMily and Serena and Andy's mom< ruddy, bleeding hell that was great. And I do so very much adore your Serena, she just keeps getting better, :).

And all the interplay with Nigel was just so great. Heart strings wringing from start to finish.

Thanks for the midnight fun. :-)

quiethearted January 13 2010, 23:56:45 UTC

I hear Julie Andrews musicals in my head. "You are sixteen, going on seventeen....." roflmao.

xenavirgin January 14 2010, 00:07:17 UTC

TLW says, she may send the drycleaning bill for the sweater. Pffffttt. Hehehheheh LOLOL

quiethearted January 14 2010, 06:40:25 UTC

Trust TLW not to own wash and wear. Ok, just stick the bill in with the rest of the snail mail you're sending. I'll be counting my pennies til it gets here. Next time drink water...*G*

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quiethearted January 13 2010, 23:55:37 UTC

When the writing is exceptionally good, I come away with 'golden nuggets', lines that stay in my memory forever. You've provided several. Thank you.

hawkbehere January 14 2010, 02:27:56 UTC

You are entirely too kind. But thank you, very and truly sincerely.

ravenbull January 14 2010, 01:09:53 UTC

Tearing up during Carlo/Nigel scene. Then...Carlo laughed and said, “I hope that doesn’t mean you want me to be your daddy.” Laughed so hard...happy tears! From empathy to hootage in a single bound...gurrl~you have got the gift.

Tell the truth- You're really a bestselling author and fan fiction is your hobby.

hawkbehere January 14 2010, 02:32:48 UTC

I wish I were. I've always written for a living but this is my last fanfic and on to writing fiction for real. I wish I could say I were a plumber or carpenter or something useful--but no. Just a writer having a bit of fun. I'm so happy you're enjoying it. Thanks for reading and for taking the time to write me.

quiethearted January 14 2010, 06:37:47 UTC

*cleaning glasses and re-reading this post* Last fanfic? What? This is a typo, right?

hawkbehere January 14 2010, 23:06:09 UTC

I may write a few--I can't seem to help myself but NEVER another one this long! Short and simple!

akasarahsmom January 14 2010, 01:29:43 UTC

Great update... I SO love this story. :)

hawkbehere January 14 2010, 02:33:56 UTC

I love that you love it. I'm always grateful to hear from you.

akasarahsmom January 14 2010, 02:45:06 UTC

LOL... I wish I had a better explanation for how much I love this story!

I think I'm going to be sad when it ends.

hawkbehere January 14 2010, 06:01:33 UTC

I'll be sad to end it as well, but I hope we get a few more laughs in before it's over. Thank you so for reading it.