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The Best Laid Plans - nc-17 - by thesteppyone

Mar 01, 2010 00:12

Title: The Best Laid Plans
Author: thesteppyone
Summary: In the beginning, there was a plan, one that revolved around Ron Weasley. He knew it would be hard and that he would be challenged but he didn't realise how much this mission would change his life and those of others.
Rating: NC-17
Words: 32,672
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the ( Read more... )

2010, author:thesteppyone, rating:nc-17

Comments 22

shygryf March 3 2010, 22:32:38 UTC

I really like the timeline out of order though you are insane to write it that way.

poor Hermione *loans her Oliver*

this is an awesome story and i am very proud of you!

thesteppyone March 17 2010, 08:49:55 UTC

Yes, as I said, I thought it would be 'interesting'. Hmm.

Thanks hon, your words are much appreciated. *hugs*

oncelikeshari March 4 2010, 12:05:20 UTC

Oh the plot!

*applauds*

Plotty angst and jiggery timelines and you're all clever!

And what a marvelous Ron.

*sighs*

thesteppyone March 17 2010, 08:50:52 UTC

The plot did my head in at times and I had to keep re-reading what I'd done because I'd forgotten what had happened... I'm not sure that's supposed to happen!

Thanks sis! *hugs*

annafugazzi March 5 2010, 05:08:20 UTC

Oh, brilliant! The ending had me grinning like a loon. And I love that Hermione didn't just shrug and say "Hey, no problem, as long as you're happy." The description of the mind-games Ron had to play on himself was freaking brilliant, and rather chilling as well. Loved this part:

It's bizarre that I have to remind myself that it doesn't annoy me that Harry likes Kingsley and the way he runs the Ministry or that it doesn't actually bother me that he leaves his dirty washing on the floor of his bedroom; it's just that I blew these things out of proportion so much that it's hard to get things back into perspective.

Well done!

thesteppyone March 17 2010, 08:54:20 UTC

I couldn't have Hermione happy with this, I mean I see her being okay with it eventually because it's Harry and it's Ron, but she'd be devastated!

I was worried that Ron might seem out of character so I explained the mind-fuckery maybe more than was necessary but it kept me sane!

Thank you for reviewing, it means a lot :)

triomakesmehot March 10 2010, 01:02:28 UTC

but he knew that the only reason he was doing what he was doing was because he wanted to.

And who, in their right mind, could possibly blame him?

'I'm yours, I'd give you anything if you asked.'

Wish he’d say that to me . . .

'Godthat'sgood!' Ron shouted in a rush.

That is EXACTLY what I was thinking!

and to be fair, I've seen you bollock naked before so…'

*snorts* Quite a few of us have, you know . . .

Hermione or Harry. He couldn't have both, neither of them would settle for that.

Well, why the hell not? (I know, not the point of this particular fest, but I do love then Harry and Hermione can share their toy).

'Do you know how hard it is to watch you leave to go to him?'

Talk about a clueless Harry . . .

You gave up everything that you loved to do this for the Magical Community and to make sure harm didn't come to us. Only special people do that.'

*sniffs* Makes both our boys pretty special, doesn’t it?

No, not normal...special.

Points up at her previous comment. *sighs*

a half dried Harry wearing only a towel ( ... )

thesteppyone March 21 2010, 18:33:58 UTC

Heeeeeeeeeeee! How I adore cut/paste reviews :D

I know I had Hermione be rather harsh with Ron and Harry but I just think she'd be floored with something ilke that. She knew that Bad Things might happen to Ron on his mission but losing him to their best friend wasn't one of them!

Thank you so very much for commenting :D

innibis March 11 2010, 15:27:40 UTC

Honestly, he did mind, because he wasn't sure what had just happened. He had just had sex with Harry, his best friend.

And very hot, raw sex it was, despite it not being part of the plan.

She wasn't heartless; anything she got involved in she did with all her heart and all the passion inside her. If she was going to do something she was going to do it the best she could, and she couldn't do that without pouring her heart into everything she did and had.

That's so Hermione. It's hard to fake a fight when there are real issues under the surface.

He needed to feel like he knew he should. Not like he did when he and Harry…

Oh that hurts. Poor Hermione. And Harry.

just so he could think clearly about what he wanted and what he should do. He knew deep down that the two might be mutually exclusive, but he would cross that bridge when he came to it. If he ever got time to think.I love being so deeply immersed in Ron's head and him not thinking at all that neither Harry nor Hermione would want to be a Should Do as opposed to a Wanted ( ... )

thesteppyone March 21 2010, 18:37:06 UTC

:D as I said to triomakesmehot I love cut/paste reviews *dances*

to Hermione just beautiful in her anger and sadness

Okay, I know that this story's all about Ron and his relationship with Harry but complimenting my Hermione makes me bounce!

Thank you for the awesome review and I'm very happy you liked it. :D