Strange Condition

Oct 01, 2007 23:51

Title: Strange Condition
Author: Harikari
Pairing: Sylinder (Sylar/Mohinder)
Rating: Hard R
Disclaimer: Don't own em'. No copyright infringement is intended. I'm writing this for fun, not profit.
Warnings: Major spoilers for all of season 1, violence, some gore, strong language, eventual slash and sex(iness), possible dub-con/attempted non-con, ( Read more... )

strange condition, sylar/mohinder, fanfiction

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gestalt1 October 2 2007, 15:14:11 UTC
Oooh, good start! You have me intrigued!

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hari_kari October 2 2007, 17:21:41 UTC
Thank you! I'll try and post the next part soon.

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forsquilis October 2 2007, 17:27:26 UTC
This was really well-written, and I'm looking forward to the next part already!

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hari_kari October 2 2007, 22:37:50 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you like it so far. :)

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poemwithnorhyme October 2 2007, 18:13:40 UTC
This is very very intriguing, I can't wait to read more. Great job with the emotions in this, I felt the panic and paranoia that Mohinder felt, made me feel like someone was watching me. Just wish it would be someone as sexy as Sylar, ^_^

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hari_kari October 2 2007, 22:39:02 UTC
LOL. Thanks so much! :)

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levitatethis October 2 2007, 21:32:15 UTC
Fantastic start! I loved how you built up the tension...it honestly had me on the edge of my seat. I look forward to seeing where you take this.

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hari_kari October 2 2007, 22:39:40 UTC
Thank you! I'll try and post the next part soon.

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jessieflower October 3 2007, 20:40:54 UTC
Lots of tension. I was on the edge of my seat, trying to find out what this guy's power was.

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hari_kari October 4 2007, 01:59:13 UTC
Thanks for commenting! :)

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