a fleeting moment of intense emotion
a/n: three ficlets i posted on my AFF last year. i didn't like them enough back then to share them here, but i've edited them a bit and now they're slightly better (i hope! lol).
middle people
868w; pg (fei/lay)
those who left, and those who were left behind.
a/n: vaguely about the Kris situation. set in 2014, before Luhan left.
( the darkness pools underneath his eyes, trickling down the contours of his cheekbones, dribbling down to his chin. )
middle people
868w; pg (fei/lay)
those who left, and those who were left behind.
a/n: vaguely about the Kris situation. set in 2014, before Luhan left.
( the darkness pools underneath his eyes, trickling down the contours of his cheekbones, dribbling down to his chin. )
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i'm incoherent at your comment! this was so sweet i'm just lskasjkdf on the floor, what are words really? i've always felt i lacked emotional depth when writing canon-verse, so i'm glad that you felt so much (?) from these!
and i really like your insight into the line you highlighted from the fei/lay fic! i intended to base the fic around conversations in which the characters skirted around the issue rather than acknowledging it so :D
HOW DO I REPLY TO THIS COMMENT this really made me smile so much, thank you! ♥♥♥♥♥♥
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thank you so much ;-; when i posted the first version, one of my friends suggested making the allusions to the Kris situation more obvious, but i liked focusing more on China-line who were still in Korea so! glad that worked! ♥♥♥
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your sentences are.... really smooth.
and your tone is very consistent and fluid i'm.... i really like these. /cries/
<3
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that's a huge compliment for me, since i felt that these were more disjointed, ldskgaskjdf you're too kind /cries!
thank you for reading! ♥♥♥
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YOU AND YOUR FLAWLESS WRITING ♥;_______;
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;_____; thank you Elle bb ♥♥♥
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