X-Men Fic: "More Human Than Human" Chapter 5 [WIP]

[hannasus]

TITLE: “More Human Than Human”
FANDOM: X-Men (Movieverse)
SUMMARY: “As if you could kill time without injuring eternity.”
RATING: R (for language)

CHAPTER ONE: Ratfinks, Suicide Tanks and Cannibal Girls
CHAPTER TWO: Two-Lane Blacktop
CHAPTER THREE: How to Make a Monster
CHAPTER FOUR: The Devil's Rejects

Comments

[blackcattights]

I'm SO enjoying this! Thanks for the great chapter, and I'm looking forward to more.

[hannasus]

Thanks for reading! I should be posting the next chapter before too long.

Re: Great stuff

[hannasus]

I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for reading!

[trovia]

I had a lot of fun reading this. I really like how you fleshed out Elizabeth in particular, and the little cameos by Nightcrawler, now Bobby and Rogue were also very entertaining. I really liked the little moment of Bobby thinking of his family here, without being a particular Bobby fan or anything. Also it's nice to see somebody challenge Xavier on a more academic level than Logan does in the movies. I'd certainly be back to read a continuation.

[hannasus]

I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I really worried about Elizabeth because I wanted to give her a unique, authentic voice that didn't feel like a Mary Sue.

There'll be more of the other X-Men in upcoming chapters, the next of which should be ready soon.

[violetlanier]

i love this. it is hard to find good stories with psylocke in them and she is one of my favorite female characters. i am looking forward to the next chapter.

[hannasus]

Thanks so much! I really tried to stay true to Psylocke's comic origins even though I updated her to fit in with the movieverse canon. I hope to have the next chapter up before too long.