Title: Gone
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Dean (Gen, Drama)
Rating: PG
Summary (Pre-Series): Take your brother and run…
Author's Notes: For
5_prompts ("A lifetime in one breath").
Also for
supernatural100 ("Windows").
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Dean shivered under the stars... )
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One thing didn't work for me, though: I think a child that small wouldn't be able to say, "It didn't mean they'd lose the whole house." I think it would be more ambiguous and more related to people or pets ( none here) and maybe favorite toys, or even "where would Sammy sleep if his crib and his room burned up?"
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Dean has Sammy, so he knows Sammy's safe, and it's so like a child to think that his parents can fix anything (at his age, Dean has already learned that problems that seem enormous to him are smaller to grownups).
Discovering that they can't is a huge step in the death of innocence. :(
Thanks for reading!
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How this turns out for him, more than Sam or even John... it just cuts like a knife. That will always ache for me.
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Beautiful! I'm saving this to memories because ... I love it!
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- taking care for Sammy.
Hello and sorry for being *coughs a little late, my dear Mme Venus; but here I am, finally to tell you how deeply your little drama snippet has moved me.
*nods**nods*
"A siren sounded in the distance as his father finally stumbled out of the house.
Alone."
- O dear. The bitter truth. And still so heartbraking, even after the hundredth time.
So thank you very much for writing that intense little Winchester drabble, my dearest Mme Venus, it was - despite all sadness and pain - a pleasure to read, as always.
*hugs* ♥
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That has really always been one of the strongest things I take away from that moment: it's not just about the Winchester family, it's very much the end of Dean's childhood, forever. At age 5. :(
And still so heartbraking, even after the hundredth time.
It really is, isn't it? A moment like that never stops hurting, not for Dean or for anyone who loves the show.
Thanks so much for reading and commenting! And for my lovely, nommable chocolate. :D
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