the double regeneration is so cool! although also poor five - even without peri, he cannot survive stupid androzani. six's strangling also makes a lot more sense in your version and is less creepy because the master deserves it more than peri (even though she is annoying). excellent stuff - i <3 six and am looking forward to more!
For concrit, I think it should be lands instead of landed in the first sentence if you're going present tense. That kind of jolted me out of things before the story even began.
But I do like this. Poor Five, always dying. I guess he didn't end up with Peri in this AU (or he didn't manage to save her?). I do like the idea of Fivey doing that to the Master after Planet of Fire. And the insight into Six's coat. Very nice.
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But I do like this. Poor Five, always dying. I guess he didn't end up with Peri in this AU (or he didn't manage to save her?). I do like the idea of Fivey doing that to the Master after Planet of Fire. And the insight into Six's coat. Very nice.
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