[Fic] GW500 prompt - trio, Mental Math

[lil_1337]

Title: Mental Math
Author: lil_1337
Pairing/Characters: 3x4+5
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 500
Warnings/Kinks: None
Summary: For the gw500 prompt trio.
Disclaimer: Not mine. Not even close.

Comments

[dentelle_noir]

"You forget I've seen the two of you together Winner.”-- “He is, in fact, always this bad.”

I laughed my ass off! Whenever I play trowa, he IS always that bad. I love how you write him, and I can definitely see Wufei learning to get along well with them.

[lil_1337]

Everyone I know who writes/rps Trowa and does it well characterizes him as a pervert. It seems to be one of the key points.

[dentelle_noir]

^Truth!

Also, I totally have to agree with liking pulling Wufei as off balance physically as he already was emotionally as a line. I think that was definitely an interesting way of putting it because, really, we already know how tugging someone over like that would affect them... so it's actually showing us his mental state, even though that's not how the sentence is worded at first glance. It's a clever little bit of sneaky phrasing. That's how I thought of it when I read your story, anyway! :)

[lil_1337]

Thank you. In this case his physical state mirrors his emotional state and the two are tied together as the components of desire.

[4bdnsn0wflake]

pulling Wufei as off balance physically as he already was emotionally

words he needed to say piling up in his throat until none could pass

^ I liked these lines a lot.

[lil_1337]

I worked hard on the first one so I'm very pleased you liked it.

[paranoidpen]

[grins] That opening part was very familiar. They always seem to throw Wu Fei off balance. XD
Thank you for this pick me up. <3

That reminds me. Do you know of any published stories that have threesomes in them?

[lil_1337]

I would feel bad for Wufei if he didn't get such a nice reward for it.

Not that I can think of off the top of my head.

[paranoidpen]

Haha! Nice! d^_^b

Hmn..I was wondering if it's breached beyond fanfiction yet. ;p

[lil_1337]

I'm sure it has I just can't think of anything off the top of my head. My best guess would be scifi or fantasy since those two genres have more flexibility.