Comments | gryff_of_grace: Destined, chapter 16

gryff_of_grace

Destined, chapter 16

Nov 01, 2007 13:43

Title: Destined
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing: Peter/Claire, West/Claire, Zach/Claire friendship
Rating: PG-13
Summary: As Claire continues with life after New York, the reappearance of her uncle in her life is only the beginning of a series of events that will change her life forever. This Chapter: Claire has a memory problem.
Previous Chapters: 1, 2 ( Read more... )

chaptered fic, peter/claire, fandom: heroes, universe: season 1 canon, rating: pg

Comments 21

anonymous November 4 2007, 16:20:20 UTC

i love your story, looking forward to the next update :D

gryff_of_grace November 4 2007, 18:17:22 UTC

Thank you so much! ♥

rtwofan November 5 2007, 21:04:12 UTC

Dun dun dun! XD Sorry it took me so long to review this dearie. I lost it at first, but managed to read it fully last night. And, even through your personal troubles, you still manage to pump out a great chapter =)

Hopefully, all the memory flashes say that Claire *might* get her memory back? Right? Right? *nudges* Then agaaaaain, the whole not-knowing-Peter-is-her-uncle thing is really working well. I love how you've made Claire amnesiac, rather then how PETER is in canon. It adds a new spin on a common angst line. Plus, amnesia adds a "what would Peter do if he could get away with it?" edge, seeing as he could play off her ignorance. But I'm sure dear Peter would never do anything like that *whistles*

ever_obsessed November 7 2007, 19:43:34 UTC

You really do have an incredible Niki, love her to death.

I love how well you handled Peter's emotions here, easy to pick up on even through Claire's POV, which is difficult to do. You pulled it off, and it was incredible because, in addition to being all suqeeworthy, they're also all heartbreaking at the same time - and, yeah, it's freaking awesome.

You have us on the edge of our seats, heh!

leiamary November 27 2007, 03:55:35 UTC

Hi there! Just wanted to tell you that I just found this journal and LOVE the story. Can't wait to see what happens next.

gryff_of_grace December 31 2007, 17:20:41 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like the story. :)

I iz watching you! vonwifflepuff December 6 2007, 20:43:17 UTC

If you're getting the feeling that someone's looming over you and staring intensely at you, it's because I am looming over you and staring intensely at you. Well, at least, I've been looming & staring at your journal, waiting to see if Chap 17 had been posted.

Soooooo, since you've gotten me addicted to "Destined", I was wondering, how's Chapter 17 coming along? Any idea when it'll be posted? *looks at you with puppy eyes*

(Happy belated Birthday, btw! I had to check your rl LJ to see if you'd croaked or something..... it'd be pretty embarrassing if you'd died or something catastrophic happened to you, and here I was, stamping my feet in impatience for the next chapter. Eep!)

*resumes looming and staring*

Re: I iz watching you! gryff_of_grace December 31 2007, 17:22:28 UTC

Hi, there! So sorry it's taken me so long to reply to your comment, but I've been so unbelievably busy... Chapter 17 is coming along great, a loooot slower than I expected, unfortunately, because of all the stuff that's been going on in my life. Definitely expect an update within this week. :)

And thanks for the birthday wishes! I'm glad you were concerned about me. :D