Destined, chapter 16

[gryff_of_grace]

Title: Destined
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing: Peter/Claire, West/Claire, Zach/Claire friendship
Rating: PG-13
Summary: As Claire continues with life after New York, the reappearance of her uncle in her life is only the beginning of a series of events that will change her life forever. This Chapter: Claire has a memory problem.
Previous Chapters: 1, 2

Comments

I love this fanfic!

[vonwifflepuff]

I'm new to reading fanfic, but "Destined" was the first I've read, and I read all the other chapters in one day, mid-October, when I first discovered it. Waiting 2 weeks, checking your page 3-4 times a day to see if Chap 16 had been posted (yes, seriously!), was excruciating! But it was so worth it. Really really really good writing, and I love where you're going with this story.

I just wanted to say thank you for putting your writing talent and effort into this fic, and for posting it here so that others can enjoy it. I hope things get better for you this next month!

Best wishes!

Re: I love this fanfic!

[gryff_of_grace]

Wow, I'm so flattered by your devotion to this story and so happy that you like it so much! ♥ I'm so pleased that you like my writing and where the story is going. Thank you so much. :)

[dragonydreams]

I'm so glad to see a new chapter of this story.

It must be incredibly frustrating for Claire to wake up with no memories and lots of people surrounding her who she's supposed to know. I like getting the flashes of memory though. Can't wait to find out what's on her back.

[gryff_of_grace]

Yay, I'm glad you like the flashes! They're fun to write. I'm glad you're still sticking with this, hon! :)

[karanina]

lolz - Peter doesn't want he to know he's her uncle! I wonder how long THAT's gonna last! Also, I am now insanely more curious about what happened to Claire while she was away and what's on her back! I love how Peter gives West such shit!

Thanks for the update!

[gryff_of_grace]

lolz - Peter doesn't want he to know he's her uncle!

I think there's definitely a part of him that doesn't want her to know. ;) I'm so glad you're liking this and are eager to find out what happens next! Thank you for commenting! <3333

[joanna_484]

"Claire," he says, but when he says her name, it doesn't sound like her name. The soft reverence in his voice is confusing.

Ooh, I love that, as well as all the other little telling signs Claire picks up from Peter :)

I am so happy that, even though she doesn't remember who Peter is, Claire still feels a natural pull toward him :) So the same should happen with Peter toward Claire when they finally reunite on the show. Right? Right *nods emphatically*

she feels awkward and tense at the look Peter is giving her, as if he wants to wipe her tears away.

Of course he does :D But he's too much of kind soul to take the liberty of such an intimate gesture when Claire doesn't remember their strong bond or how much they've been through together. That's a really nice touch, Nat :)

"Simon and Monty are your nephews."

Aren't they Claire's half-brothers?

when Peter knocks on her bedroom door - twice this time.Ah, that's so funny *lol* Peter's so sensitive, mistaken in his desire to pay heed to Claire's previous request :D

[gryff_of_grace]

I am so happy that, even though she doesn't remember who Peter is, Claire still feels a natural pull toward him :) So the same should happen with Peter toward Claire when they finally reunite on the show. Right? Right *nods emphatically*

Well, on the show they didn't know each other and felt that natural pull toward each other. Only makes sense that if one of them forgot who the other was, they'd still feel that pull. I can only hope it happens on the show!

Aren't they Claire's half-brothers?

That they are. *headdesk* I know that. Sometimes my fingers type without a brain!

Ah, that's so funny *lol* Peter's so sensitive, mistaken in his desire to pay heed to Claire's previous request :D

Hee, I'm glad you noticed that! I wasn't sure if anyone was going to pick up on that or not.

That's usually my response to West's insensitive, bullying, stalkerish, cruel behaviour on the show, too.Well, I think the way I'm writing West is different from on the show, since I started planning him out before the show started up again. But

[elliesmeow]

Wow. I wonder what Claire found on her back. And where has West been all this time?

Sorry to hear that RL has been giving you issues. Hope things calm down soon. Looking forward to the next part, thanks for posting in the midst of all your chaos!

-Ellie

[gryff_of_grace]

You will definitely find out the answers to those questions! :)

Thanks for the good wishes about my RL! *hugs*