Butterfly Kisses Contest Entry

[griluvisvip]

Title: Tell Me Goodbye (Butterfly contest entry, prompt #1) [1/3]
Rating: NC-17 (I meant it children)
Warnings: Contains material not appropriate for viewers of all ages. Viewer discretion is advised. (sex, violence, suicidal thoughts)
Genre: Angst (AU)
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Comments

[hiroyukishinji]

im not gonna lie...im silently crying my eyes out right now, with how freaking heartbreaking this is. damn...

[griluvisvip]

awww *huggles you* I didn't mean to make you cry!! I'm sorry!! *wipes away your tears with soft, fluffy tissues* but...you liked it right?

[kwonjiyongvips]

I cried in rl ;_;
I would like to say so many things but
I actually have no words for this, it's just heartbreaking, and I think it's been a long time since I read a fic this good, I love these kind of fics, sad and heartbreaking, and you wrote it, so i'm happy now and i'm definitely gonna bookmark this, thank you so much for sharing, I hope i'll read more fics like this from you, or is there one that you reccomend me reading?

[griluvisvip]

awwwww *huggles you* I'm sorry, I didn't mean to make you cry! But I'm glad you loved it :) Between you and me, your best bet for angst would be me or papersanguine since we're both angstwhores XD but I'll definitely be writing more fics like this soon. Have no fear! There's a just as angsty but slightly fluffier part two on the way!

[kwonjiyongvips]

I KNOWWWW!! PAPERSANGUINE! I LOVE HER O_O!
You do requests? ;)

[griluvisvip]

sure! i think it'd be fun and make for some good writing experience! bring on the requests!

[oxygenlove]

I hate you Jiyong.

[oxygenlove]

Uh, sorry. That's not my real comment.

This is:

First, AU :) So much easier to understand.

Second, I hate you, Jiyong. Please go and die. /fine, not really because Seungri loves you but really, you know? Die.

Third, okay, I forgive Jiyong because he's so sweet to Seungri in real life.

Fourth, this is so heartbreaking. Because it's very descriptive of the characters' emotions, it really got me hooked. And that partt when Seungri got the rings... really, just- why so cruel, Jiyong?

Love works this way. The high of love works for at least 2 years, then companionship, then real love. If you don't survive the years after the high- your relationship is doomed (yes, thanks to David Meyers's Social Psych, I know this.)

ANYWAYS, I think I understand Jiyong a bit, and that makes it even more sad for me. Like, he regrets things, but he doesn;t know how to right his wrongs.

Why are you killing me with angst?

♥

[griluvisvip]

Awww *huggles* I don't mean to kill you with angst, but angst is what I'm good at XD I totally agree with you on the whole Jiyong bit. Thank you for reading and enjoying even though it was really angsty. ^_^

[oxygenlove]

LOL, I started with angst and have now learned to write fluff. But angst is still my favorite genre. And! Unlike here, I love seeing Jiyong suffer. Like really, suffer. Those are the angst i love the most. /evil smirk

Much ♥

[stupidefleurk]

I'm going to vote for you right now ;)
I can't wait for the sequel X_X you should write a teaser lol

[casatoku]

omg,this is too heartbreaking!! ;_;
i cant forgive jiyong! i cant forgive he rape baby!!
baby will be trauma
jiyong should be suffer n feel seungri's pain, then i will forgive u,jiyong!
i want jiyong suffer >:D
this fic is really angst(that mean is really good =D)