Butterfly Kisses Contest Entry

[griluvisvip]

Title: Tell Me Goodbye (Butterfly contest entry, prompt #1) [1/3]
Rating: NC-17 (I meant it children)
Warnings: Contains material not appropriate for viewers of all ages. Viewer discretion is advised. (sex, violence, suicidal thoughts)
Genre: Angst (AU)
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Comments

[tiffylicious]

THIS WAS AMAZING, INCREDIBLE, HEARTBREAKING AND JUST WOW! I can't seem to form a completely coherent sentence, that's how awesome this fic was. :)

My heart was crying out for poor RiRi being abused, used & heartbroken by mean stupid jiyong who couldn't just see that the person perfect for him was there all along.

This was so beautifully written i was almost crying (or maybe i was lol). Write more soon! <3

[tiffylicious]

O_O Am I first to comment?! lol I was so amazed by your fic i just realized that xD

Yay for being a subconscious ninja! LOL

[griluvisvip]

Yay for being ninja! Awww *huggles you* thanks for the awesome comment. Have no fear, there's a part two on the way, and I promise the ending will be happy (maybe) :)

[tiffylicious]

A part 2?! Oh I can't wait!! *huggles back* :D

[stupidefleurk]

Ahhh I've waiting for this for so long!
I'm not disappointed at all,it was awesome !The fact that the fic was long please me even more :D

My panda ! D: My god Jiyong is so horrible,I was almost whishing that Seungri find someone else to fix him.I guess Jiyong raped him cause he wanted him too much (loved him too much ?)and couldn't control himself or he would have sleep with any other man...I pity the fiancé lol the day before the wedding ?!Nice one Jiyong ,you're a total asshole XD
Still,I don't understand how he can break Seungri's heart like that :/ (I have huge mothers instincts for Seungri so I kind of wanted to punch jiyong lol)

I love your style,it's so pleasant to read (even thought the angst kill everyone lol).And I love your word "misteress" keke Personnaly ,I would have want Seungri to be Jiyong's misteress :p

Can I ask for a sequel ?*puppy eyes*

[griluvisvip]

Oh but of course! I was already working on a part 2 anyway XD But I'm really glad you enjoyed it so much despite how angsty it was. That means I did my job well. Wonder if I'll win...

[stupidefleurk]

AAHHH CAN'T WAIT :D *jump*
Don't worry,I have a fetish for angst :p
Can we vote for severals persons for the contest ?

[papersanguine]

AAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!! A Part 2?!?!??! YES!!!

[g_odalisque13]

this was so incredibly heartbreaking.
but it's beautifully written.
and i don't even know what to say other than you did an amazing job with this.

[griluvisvip]

awww *huggle* thank you for reading and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed it even though it was incredibly angsty :)

[kwonjiyongvips]

OMFG I AM NOW READING THIS. BUT I NEED TO GO TO SLEEP, I am almost done with reading, tomorrow ill finish it, and comment properly.. so far, i absolutely enjoyed it.

[papersanguine]

Oh be still my angstwhore heart! I am loving this fic. If that makes me sick twisted or cold so be it cause damn this is amazing!!!

[griluvisvip]

then we'll be sick twisted and cold together! Me for writing this, and you for loving it XD But I'm glad you enjoyed it babe, I did dedicate this to you after all :)

[papersanguine]

Oh em gee thanks!! :D I think sometimes that my love of hurting Seungri(in fiction of course) will reach it's limits, but then it never comes! I am so glad someone else shares my SAW (Seungri Angst Whore) ways. <3

[griluvisvip]

we're two peas in an incredibly angsty SAW pod babe ;)