Haunted, parts 10-12

[kribu]

Title: Haunted
Team Name: Spy for the Order
Word Count: 3x100
Rating: G
Challenge: Haunted House challenge
Characters: Hermione, Severus
A/N: Post-DH. Previous sets can be found here (1-3), here (4-6) and here (7-9)He stopped abruptly, as if he’d realised he had already said more than he had intended

Comments

[ayerf]

Powerful stuff, especially that last line!

*offers a bushel of chocolate carrots as bribery for more*

[kribu]

I'm certainly learning one thing with writing this - each time, the last line gets the most praise. I should just start writing last lines! :-D

A whole bushel? Yay!

[a_bees_buzz]

You write a perfect hurt!Snape voice, my dear.

Now Hermione needs to soothe his poor, worried, translucent brow and bring out romantic!Snape.

[kribu]

Thank you! And yes - it's just what he'd need. :-D

[blackeyedlily]

This is a lovely story. I'm enjoying following along.

[kribu]

Thank you! :-)

[sbrande]

Oh how sad and bitter Severus has become. You have to make this right. Have Hermione hit her head leaving, die, and join him.

Love Sonia :)

[kribu]

Such a sweet thing to wish for! :-D

[sbrande]

Well I'm just looking out for my interests, which is of course, Severus and Hermione getting together. I could not come up with another way of putting it and I highly doubt Hermione will delve into Dark Magic, unless he has a Horcrux somewhere, which would make this little drabble all the more interesting!

Love Sonia :)

[kribu]

That would be interesting! I don't know though - would someone turn into a ghost if they had a Horcrux hidden somewhere? *ponders*

[chilliconcarne]

"Disliked - hated - by everyone, doomed to spend the eternity facing the reason for his guilt."

Kind of sounds like his fate as a teacher before he died .. :D

If neither Hermie or Ron die eventually, I want my money back. :p

[kribu]

I felt very sad for Snape when I wrote that bit.

Money? I don't remember you paying me... hmm. I'm sure they'll die eventually though, most people do!