A porny Valentine for my friendslist. Some dear lovely anonymouse gave me candy hearts for my profile page, but since I don't know who it was, everyone gets the gratitude fic.
romanyg *also* gave me crunchy love candies, so this is specifically for her, because it features f/f rimming and a reacharound, and
a2zmom *also-also*, because Babs/Dick is one of her
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I liked the atmosphere, and I liked the tone. A lot of times girlslash doesn't do it for me, but this was lovely and smoky and sleek. An earlier comment said they found Dick's characterization somewhat thin. I think that has more to do with Dick simply not being as much in the story as Babs and Selina, and in any case, seeing him through Babs' eyes is its own education; it's very much her story, after all. You get the sense of how much she does care for and value him.
I always enjoy your stories but rarely comment. Thanks for writing stories that are so cool to read. :)
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I really appreciate you taking the time to leave this comment; I've been in something of a tailspin about this fic since posting it, so it's more than simply reassuring to hear that the story found a receptive reader in you. Restricting the voice to Babs' head meant I had to leave a lot of stuff out, but I had been fairly pleased with what it allowed me to include. I'm glad to know you liked the inclusions, too.
Thank you so much!
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As you know, I love Dick and Babs but I also really love Selina and what I liked here was this was a Babs and Selina shaken and stirred but still very recognizable. It's harder to gauge Dick here, mostly he's seen here as the guy who will do anything for Babs (which is true enough, but that's only a small part of him.)
I found this very hot (you always write great porn!) and there really isn't enough girl on girl action in general.
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I love Dick and Babs but I also really love Selina and what I liked here was this was a Babs and Selina shaken and stirred but still very recognizable.
Oh, wonderful! When I was fiddling around with this idea and ran it past petronelle, she pointed out that this Dick is both old enough and *without* weird mommy-issues around Selina, and that's what let me give this a whirl. In the main canon, as much as I really want a Batman/Robin/Catwoman threesome, I can't make it work (and for once, it's not just Bruce's fault *g*).
It's harder to gauge Dick here, mostly he's seen here as the guy who will do anything for Babs (which is true enough, but that's only a small part of him.)*nodnod* Thrillkiller doesn't give us much to go on; at times, it's even hard to tell what *Babs* thinks of ( ... )
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Zitka rocks, dude.
Sorry about the brain-breakage, but one must do what one can in the cause of PORN. :D
Thanks.
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They're so *young*, and it shows.
It's all about the costume. When she's the Bat, she's mean and *fierce*, flying low and striking hard. When she's dolled up as the ditzy heiress, she laughs quicker than champagne and dances all night.
And, now, wearing trousers and tipping her fedora brim to the prettiest girls as she strides down Sprang, she's all man. She's taking up too much space, her arms swinging free, as she adopts Dick's liquid swagger. It's in the hips and jut of the shoulders, Zitka's pressure burning warm between her legs, a cock of her head and wide grin. It's the confidence that she belongs and can take whatever she wants.Oooooooohhhhhhhh. Guh. Yes. Laughing quicker than champagne is *beautiful*, and this Babs would totally think 'dolled up.' Mmmm, Dick's liquid swagger, I'm going to think about Babs moving like that now. Mmmmm. * ( ... )
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Dick tries to look at her, one blue eye rolling wild, but the Cat's got him pinned between one hand and one thigh. On her knees beside them, Babs kisses the Cat's thigh where her stocking is laddered and bats Dick's hand away from his cock.
Oh, *Dick*. Oh Dick. Oh baby boy. Honey. (*Pinned*? Wow.)
I. I am a little scared for him? And also really envious of Babs, and I want to *hug him*, and oh my boy. Okay, I'm a *lot* worried for him. He's so in love with her and she's really *really* not safe, not good for him and oh oh oh oh dear.
Ow.
*goes back to the image of Babs fingering Dick until his throat's hoarse from yelling*
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You know?
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Poor *kid*, man.
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I love the irrepressibility of thrillkiller Babs, the way she won't let anyone or anything dictate her actions and gets herself into trouble that way. I think thrillkiller!Babs' defining characteristic is that she doesn't want to hurt people, but refuses to let that stop her from doing what she knows she shouldn't.
Mmm Babs/Selina.
Oh Richart.
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I forgot about that.
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