Fic: Double Tap [TVXQ RPS]

[glitterburn]

Title: Double Tap
Fandom: TVXQ
Pairing: Yunho/Changmin/Siwon
Rating: NC17
Summary: Changmin has a fantasy. Yunho makes it come true.
Notes: PORN. Barebacking. Spit roast. Poppers. Double penetration. Lucky Changmin. If you haven’t seen Poseidon, Yunho and Siwon in SSAT uniforms look like this. For the Yunho and Siwon doubleteam Changmin prompt on

Comments

[satoshiice]

Usually I am not crazy about threesomes especially with changmin on the bottom but I have to tell you that this was so absolutely gorgeous. I loved that yunho was doing it all for changmin and siwon was completely adorable, and just you can tell how much yunho and changmin love each other....I really loved it and ofcourse the sex was incredible XD

[glitterburn]

Thank you! tbh threesomes and dp are on my Top 8 Fic Squicks LMAO but I wanted to see if HoMin had the power to make me overcome my dislikes, and they did :D They really are a great pairing, I have to bow to them for being so incredibly inspirational ^^

[zelshamada]

This was amazing in so, so many ways.

First, I love that is Siwon. Really. Sometimes I think Siwon and Yunho are pretty much alike; just some small details but, to me, those counts the most. But Yunho is still older, more experienced one, the hyung, so it felt so great that he was all the time teaching Siwon what to do, leading the way. He was in charge for non Siwon or Changmin to freak out.

I love Siwon in here because he knew all the time that everything was for Changmin and he was ok with it.

And the HoMin was INCREDIBLE good! I love that Changmin is so human, his emotins fast and natural. First he was very scare with the two uniformed people in the door, then (after a whole 3 seconds emotion parade) he was so turning on his truts for Yunho won over everything else.

Make Min 100% vulnarable in sex is a great touch. I believe that's pretty possible too because he's always with his guard so high that letting everything go when he's under too many emotions is great (and possible). But this:

Oh, he wants, he wants Yunho so much

[glitterburn]

Thank you for your lovely comment :D I really like Siwon, he's a good guy and trustworthy and that's one of the reasons why I wanted to write this prompt, because Siwon is probably one of the few people that Yunho would trust to play with Changmin in this way. As you say, the fic is all about trust and love ^^

[acornmama]

And I thought the last story was hard on my breathing. I am all over tickled pink with the love and joy and pride that Yunho has for Changmin here. That all of this every little bit was for his love of Changmin is the most perfect part of the story and gives the whole thing another story within a story. a beautiful story within a story.

Siwon is hilarious and a trip here.

You are amazing.

[glitterburn]

Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. Yunho adores his Changmin ♥

[lolistar73]

Oh my ducking god. Oh my dear ducking god.

How in the actual fuck did you manage to make 5000+ words of pure sex? There was just so much. So much foreplay and sex and I think my brain is broken because I can't get the image of Changmin stuffed with two cocks out of my head. You made him a perfect little sub and I was absolutely amazed at the pure *lust* that seemed to ooze out of my screen.

I can't even make a proper review because I keep seeing Siwon and Yunho completely *owning* Min and ohdeargosh. Glitterburn, I totally and utterly love you and I officially declare you my #1 Queen of Smut.

I'll be back with a proper more coherent review (eventually). -goes back to re-read-

[lolistar73]

Back with a more coherent review. Lol your inbox must be flooded with my messages

[glitterburn]

Eeee, thank you for such an awesome comment (two comments!) :D This one took me *ages* to write (like, from February HAHA) and I had about five different versions started before I was all 'wtf, just WRITE IT' and I wrote the whole thing in a day. Sometimes I get hung up on stuff and it can torpedo a fic before it gets off the ground *sigh* I'm glad I persevered with this one though!

Subspace or headspace, yes that's it ^^ A very nice place to be! I do like writing D/s because of the power balance and the sheer romance of such a relationship - because of the amount of trust it involves, it's the most romantic thing ever IMO - and HoMin are so well matched that I can see them switching like crazy and giving each other what they most need ;)

I'd greatly like to read a sequel in which Changmin fulfills Yunho's fantasyLMAO any ideas? I'm still laughing at that Big East question about where they'd like to visit and Yunho said 'Space'. So it kind of terrifies me to think of what he might fantasise about when it comes to Changmin (er, no

[lolistar73]

In response to this, I absolutely agree about the charm of D/s. I think I started reading fanfics about D/s only a few years ago and it was straight up smut to me at first. As I've gotten older and read some of the true D/s (where authors actually bother to make it more than smut) I see the trust aspect as well and I couldn't agree with you more. I feel the same way about HoMin as well. Both are so aggressive and domineering in some respects and then submissive and insecure in others. They make the perfect pairing to me

[glitterburn]

LMAO furry sex, that would be hilarious actually! Hmm I have started a collaring fic but God knows if I will ever finish it, it's been hanging around for months now *crying* I am tempted to do a proper cross-dressing fic though. Hmmmmmm..... *pondering*