Thank you. Honestly, the original version was a hot mess. Even after I edited it yesterday, it was *still* wrong so another 700 words got ripped out of it - the fact that I could cut back what I thought was the main theme so easily with only 300 words of rewrite goes to show how wrong I got this in the first place. It looks/feels like a completely different fic now, and I'm so much happier with it :)
The mind of a Bieber fan, it is indeed scary. Especially when he's feeling confused by Wookie! LOL Henry is going to be so whipped now.
There was a whole other section involving Henry tagging along on one of Mimi and Wookie's 'going out' nights, which started getting interesting in terms of Mimi's characterisation. Unfortunately it did nothing for *this* fic so that was part of the big delete.
Er, thank God the only other HenWook I've got planned is in the Shanghai AU!!! Thank you again for finding so much to like here :D
Wookie's so bossy, I bet he'd order Henry around in bed!
Oh oh oh dude I'd so love to know what Mimi gets up to on his nights out! LOL Does he go to sleazy bars to pick up men, or does he just flirt and take dirty selcas to show to Siwon when he gets back later?? XD
And Henry would absolutely love it XD I'm sure he'd be clueless without Wookie's hands-on guidance :p
LOL a shame I deleted that scene otherwise I'd send it to you (in these situations A. always says 'save it, you might use it later' and I go 'NO DON'T WANT TO' like Siwon bellowing), but yeah, Mimi goes to bars and picks up men and angsts about it because he wants Siwon someone to love him, and that was going to be the comparison with Henry and Wookie being in love with one another but unable to say it whereas Mimi can say he wants it but can't get it *woe*
So. I was trying to write an interesting comment about your fic because I seriously loved it, but I seem unable to do so. Anyways, I loved it. It's natural and beautiful and I loved Ryeowook and Henry in this, and also Zhou Mi and Sungmin. The scene with the violin was just PERFECT, sexy and beautiful all at the same time. Idk, I just, this was great. Seriously ♥
wow that was long. not complaining though, liked it a lot :3 HenWook is adorable and hot. I like how Ryeowook was being bossy, it shows a different side to him. Henry says, distant memories dancing gavottes, the recollection of hours spent practising until all the joy went from his performances and he had only misery to pour into his music, and beyond that it became mechanical, notes on a page with no meaning behind them. that's sad, really ;___; it should never go to that.. music should be about feelings, it should have a soul. Because when someone is really into it, it's like it has a soul, it touches, that's how I feel it. but sadly that's not always the reality.
The only time Ryeowook was obvious was the other night, because yeah, he supposes it’s kind of obvious when a guy gets undressed and allows you to get him off with a violin bow, but otherwise. :DDD I love how Henry's brain works xD it's so confusing and just a big mess. Though I'm sad that he speaks so many languages and people don't understand him no matter what language
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Thank you! Henry is awesome, everyone should give him (and Mimi) big love :D
I totally agree with you that music should always have a soul. I used to play clarinet when I was much younger and I admit the relentless practicing really sucked a lot of joy from it. Technically perfect but lacking in soul, and that didn't make me happy. So I guess subconsciously I was thinking of this distant memory when I wrote that for Henry. But Henry has Wookie now and I like to think he *would* write Wookie symphonies ^^
And yes, I like Kaija Koo! I like a lot of Finnish music :) Thank you again for your comment ^^
This was really beautiful in a way, mixed with the right kind of humour. It was all in a balance, and I loved the way you wrote Ryeowook, partially described in the way Henry sees him, it was really ;w;
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That poor violin, tho :0
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The mind of a Bieber fan, it is indeed scary. Especially when he's feeling confused by Wookie! LOL Henry is going to be so whipped now.
There was a whole other section involving Henry tagging along on one of Mimi and Wookie's 'going out' nights, which started getting interesting in terms of Mimi's characterisation. Unfortunately it did nothing for *this* fic so that was part of the big delete.
Er, thank God the only other HenWook I've got planned is in the Shanghai AU!!! Thank you again for finding so much to like here :D
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Oh oh oh dude I'd so love to know what Mimi gets up to on his nights out! LOL Does he go to sleazy bars to pick up men, or does he just flirt and take dirty selcas to show to Siwon when he gets back later?? XD
Shanghai AU! *squees*
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LOL a shame I deleted that scene otherwise I'd send it to you (in these situations A. always says 'save it, you might use it later' and I go 'NO DON'T WANT TO' like Siwon bellowing), but yeah, Mimi goes to bars and picks up men and angsts about it because he wants Siwon someone to love him, and that was going to be the comparison with Henry and Wookie being in love with one another but unable to say it whereas Mimi can say he wants it but can't get it *woe*
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HenWook is adorable and hot. I like how Ryeowook was being bossy, it shows a different side to him.
Henry says, distant memories dancing gavottes, the recollection of hours spent practising until all the joy went from his performances and he had only misery to pour into his music, and beyond that it became mechanical, notes on a page with no meaning behind them. that's sad, really ;___; it should never go to that.. music should be about feelings, it should have a soul. Because when someone is really into it, it's like it has a soul, it touches, that's how I feel it. but sadly that's not always the reality.
The only time Ryeowook was obvious was the other night, because yeah, he supposes it’s kind of obvious when a guy gets undressed and allows you to get him off with a violin bow, but otherwise. :DDD I love how Henry's brain works xD it's so confusing and just a big mess. Though I'm sad that he speaks so many languages and people don't understand him no matter what language ( ... )
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I totally agree with you that music should always have a soul. I used to play clarinet when I was much younger and I admit the relentless practicing really sucked a lot of joy from it. Technically perfect but lacking in soul, and that didn't make me happy. So I guess subconsciously I was thinking of this distant memory when I wrote that for Henry. But Henry has Wookie now and I like to think he *would* write Wookie symphonies ^^
And yes, I like Kaija Koo! I like a lot of Finnish music :)
Thank you again for your comment ^^
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This was really beautiful in a way, mixed with the right kind of humour. It was all in a balance, and I loved the way you wrote Ryeowook, partially described in the way Henry sees him, it was really ;w;
In other words, a really good fic :)
ps. Kaija Koo? Are you Finnish too? :D
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I'm really sad that our IKEA doesn't sell elk pasta when it's available in Taipei!
I'm not Finnish, but I love Finland (I could eat juustoleipa all day) and enjoy Finnish music a lot :D I really like Kaija Koo's voice.
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Only in Taipei? :(
Oh, okay, cool! :D It's always nice to meet people who are interested in this country XD
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