The Summer After. 5/6.

Apr 06, 2007 17:47

Title: The Summer After.
Author: elisi.
Summary: A few weeks post-NFA Giles meets some old acquaintances. But where do their loyalties lie these days? And what exactly do they want with Giles?
Rating: PG.
Feedback: I’d love to know your thoughts!
Notes: I was never all that happy with this chapter when I first wrote it, so I’ve edited and re-written it ( Read more... )

elisi: the summer after

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gillo April 6 2007, 18:12:03 UTC
Yay! My PDA connects! Great installment - looking forward to the rest.

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elisi April 6 2007, 18:15:34 UTC
Yay! My PDA connects!
*cheers*

And thank you - so glad you liked! :)

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gillo April 9 2007, 19:28:06 UTC
Sadly, that was the only time it did connect. A long weekend without LJ is tough. Off to read the rest now!

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elisi April 9 2007, 20:31:30 UTC
A long weekend without LJ is tough. Off to read the rest now!
Indeed. Enjoy your catch-up! :)

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a2zmom April 6 2007, 23:23:33 UTC
Some of the dialog seemed a bit off in this chapter, although I did like Fred/Illyria's ramblings. It's always hard to write exposition, imo.

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elisi April 7 2007, 06:39:29 UTC
It's always hard to write exposition, imo.
Word. I orginally wrote it more than two years ago, and even trying to 'fix' it a little can't quite hide the flaws that are now very apparent. (*g*)

Thanks for reading!

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makd April 7 2007, 05:57:18 UTC
bookmarked this for later reading. Glad I did. I'm really enjoying this fic. Mind if I rec?

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elisi April 7 2007, 06:40:36 UTC
Glad I did. I'm really enjoying this fic.
Squee! Thank you!

Mind if I rec?
Not at all. I'd be extremely honoured!

And I hope you like the conclusion. :)

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