Fic: Where Do We Go From Here? Chapter 1/14

[ozma914]

Title: Where Do We Go From Here

Comments

[gillo]

Excellent - as Monty Burns would say. This is a really intriguing mixture, and I really like the Scooby badinage which also helps to explain the mall jokes...

Looking forward to more of this!

[ozma914]

Glad you liked it! More surprises to come, which I hope you'll also like ...

[hesadevil]

What a wonderful beginning. I liked the opening scene showing the effect of Willow's spell on one of the new (saner) slayers and the verbal sparring between the survivors was so in character. I have more than a little sympathy for Andrew - always on the periphery.

Sweet teaming up with the Cheeseman is something I've not seen before. This promises to be a very interesting ride.

[ozma914]

I liked going to Andrew's POV, because I figured it would be different than how most writers would handle that moment.

As for Sweet and Cheeseman, what can I say? The muse was with me the day I came up with the idea of putting those two together. :-)

[myfeetshowit]

Glad to see you posting this here. Your story and this community were meant for each other.

thanks!

[ozma914]

I kinda thought that too, from the moment I first heard about it!

[scarlettlily]

Oooo this is a very interesting beginning. And choosing to have Cheeseman come back and try to fight Buffy and her army is a great idea. Can't wait for more.

[ozma914]

I'm glad you liked the beginning! I knew right from the start that I wanted to use Cheeseman; he was both a fun character and open to interpretation, since we knew nothing about him.