FanFiction: Rain

[gemmiesky]

Title: Rain
Pairing: Ohno Satoshi/Aiba Masaki
Genre: Smut
Rating: R
Length: One Shot (w/c: 1698)
Summary: Rain isn't the only thing that can make you wet...
Disclaimner: The usual I don't own them, only the plot bunny that bred so well....

A/N: I'm hopelessly chicken when it comes to sharing these things with the world.. So a big thank you to jessibear_kun  and shisaigas for

Comments

[icedragontmr]

You are a wonderful writer.... So visual. ♥

For some reason I really really enjoyed the part where Ohno noticed how wet Aiba's shirt was when they had just escaped the rain and then Aiba pulled him close, there's just something so cute about that but then the part where Aiba was redressing as Ohno watched, there was something sad about it... I can't explain that well, lol. I just really liked it.

Thanks for sharing it ^^ I really really enjoyed it!!

[gemmiesky]

Thank you so much!

My whole idea at the beginning was that it was new, curious and a bit unsettling, and in the end that Ohno was sad. While he remained a bit confused inside about what had transpired, he wanted to enjoy more time with Aiba, and clothing on meant that time would come to an end. Bittersweet momenta.. I'm glad that they were conveyed well :)

[icedragontmr]

Very well! Your writing really conveyed what you were going for! : D

[gemmiesky]

Thank you *hugs* And thank you for reading :)

[mugen_ai3]

I love this pair. Thanks for writing this.

[gemmiesky]

You are very welcome! ^^ Thanks for wandering by and reading it ^^

[mugen_ai3]

Girl I was directed here.

[gemmiesky]

OH? lol who sent you? :)