FanFiction: Rain

[gemmiesky]

Title: Rain
Pairing: Ohno Satoshi/Aiba Masaki
Genre: Smut
Rating: R
Length: One Shot (w/c: 1698)
Summary: Rain isn't the only thing that can make you wet...
Disclaimner: The usual I don't own them, only the plot bunny that bred so well....

A/N: I'm hopelessly chicken when it comes to sharing these things with the world.. So a big thank you to jessibear_kun  and shisaigas for

Comments

[jessibear_kun]

*steals* >D I'll be back to comment appropriately after re-reading.

[jessibear_kun]

This is, what? The sixth time reading it form start to finish? And yet, I'm still not tired of it. You know why? Because 1) it's Ohno and Aiba, 2) it's really hot, and 3) you wrote it wonderfully. And even included the word "cock."

I think you changed that line perfectly; the confusing one we were talking about. Also, I still love the "awkwardly" used at the end. Kanpeki da~ That summary is still killing me a little bit. . . XD

Waiting for more with bated breathe. Stalker!Jess is stalking, ne.

[gemmiesky]

you like it :D thanks for being my beta <3

I DID use the word cock XD so proud of me! lol and thank you and thank you :D

Oh good I'm so glad.. I was getting confused trying to unconfuse me ROFL not even kidding.. I kept going wait what?? D: Thank you again.. I imagine he would have felt a bit awkward after all :D Still like that summary do you? >D

I'll try another I'm sure.. :) so you just keep stalking! :D

[jessibear_kun]

No problem. Though, beta!Jess (seriously, am I gonna start talking in third-person?) found a tiny little mistake. Second paragraph: "...settled the room arrangements the only they way knew how," way and they should be switched.

Hahaha, only you, Jamie. Only you. And, yep. Best summary I've read in a long time.

In Each Other's Arms

[livejournal]

User jessibear_kun referenced to your post from In Each Other's Arms saying: [...] beginning concept (Ohno and Aiba in the rain), please feel free to check out her sister fic, Rain [...]

[redpanda]

i think there isn't enough of this pairing out there! :D ♥ i can't believe this is your first fic, you're a really good writer! O_O i think you should write more from now on ^^ loved this.

[gemmiesky]

Thank you!! *blush*

I've written several more, just not Arashi lol though I do have another one in final edit; a Sakumiya one.. and getting ready to start another as we speak :)

And up, my first full fic.. I wrote two drabbles about an hour before.. those were my first fic writings ever ^^

[redpanda]

aww you're welcome :D

then i will wait for the sakumiya one... ^^ they are like my third fav pairing or something ♥ yay!

[gemmiesky]

*hugs*

Well I hope to not disappoint. ^^ It should be up sometime soon :)

[misatsuki]

JAMIE!!!~~~~ *hugs* totally love the fic!~

[gemmiesky]

Misaaaaaaaaaaa~ *glomps* hahahah You found this finally?? lol

And thank you :D

[misatsuki]

*glomps back* lol I checked LJ again after a very long time and found this on arashirabu.

[gemmiesky]

I posted it in my own journal forever ago when I first wrote it.. Jess encouraged me to post to Arashirabu, which I did today after making an introduction post :D

[shos82]

so was it a dream?or was it real?it only takes something like water on an arashi member to get arousedXDi love the part where ohno was watching aiba take his shirt off.hot stuffXD

[gemmiesky]

Poor Ohno will never know :) And I dunno, I think Aiba like that would be pretty hot myself so why not? XD

Thank you so much *hug*